When the Dust Clears
Worry gains nothing, but wondering? Bring it on.....20 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I enjoyed my trip to this majestic land where epiphanies are as
common as butterflies. The format/style is very appealing, just sweeping
the reader right along for the vivid scenes and romance.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed my trip to this majestic land where epiphanies are as
common as butterflies. The format/style is very appealing, just sweeping
the reader right along for the vivid scenes and romance.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Janice -- and I am so very thankful for your review. :) Be sure to drop by any time .... take care! :) ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, When the Dust Clears, presented in an AABBBAA, 10,10,5,5,5,10,10 framework, creates the magical world to bring fun and adventure to the day. Fun stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This poem, When the Dust Clears, presented in an AABBBAA, 10,10,5,5,5,10,10 framework, creates the magical world to bring fun and adventure to the day. Fun stuff.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thanx for the wonderful comments, Bill -- glad to add a little fun to start your week! :) Take care! :)
Comment from royowen
Some excellent language in your skilfully scribed work Yvette, obviously a well manufactured and deftly written, you are indeed and good writer My friend, I like your unusua style, and clever and courteous mind, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Some excellent language in your skilfully scribed work Yvette, obviously a well manufactured and deftly written, you are indeed and good writer My friend, I like your unusua style, and clever and courteous mind, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx so much for the wonderful comments, Roy -- you have warmed my chilly Monday! :) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :) ;) Yvette
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Well done Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
This poem incorporates two of your favorite things, Yvette--sprites and lovely colors. I can just see your smile as you wrote it. Your muse was working overtime with this one. A handsome face took all your worries away and gave your attitude a new lease on life. I have heard all that before, but never so beautifully told in verse.
I truly enjoyed this one.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This poem incorporates two of your favorite things, Yvette--sprites and lovely colors. I can just see your smile as you wrote it. Your muse was working overtime with this one. A handsome face took all your worries away and gave your attitude a new lease on life. I have heard all that before, but never so beautifully told in verse.
I truly enjoyed this one.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Oh, you know me faaaar too well, MQ! :) And I do use the 'escape to fantasy land' to find my new attitudes....probably more often than you would expect - LOL! :) ;) Thank you for your wonderful words and for those bright, shiny stars...I'll place them in the sky where the sun's supposed to be...even though ol' Ra seems to have taken a vacation lately! :) :) Take care down there! :) Yvette :)
Comment from Bucketlist
Were you inhaling the aroma of a potplant!??? Yvette, this is beautiful. You're so much more poetically expressive than I ever will be. I agree that worrying is not productive. You pen a cute way to deal with it. As to fairies, hmmm St Patrick's Day will be here soon and you'll be the perfect writer for it LOL
Thanks for sharing your talent
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Were you inhaling the aroma of a potplant!??? Yvette, this is beautiful. You're so much more poetically expressive than I ever will be. I agree that worrying is not productive. You pen a cute way to deal with it. As to fairies, hmmm St Patrick's Day will be here soon and you'll be the perfect writer for it LOL
Thanks for sharing your talent
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Oh, Trisha - thank you, Thank You, THANK YOU for your awesome review -- your expressions are why I share all of my crazy blonde musings! :) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead dreaming up princes of your own -- you know, we 'girls' are never too old for them in our imagination! :) ;) Yvette :)
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Your welcome anytime
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about dreaming about the perfect prince charming that seems to side-step us in real life but certainly comes alive in our dreamworld and make us feel alive again. Lol.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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A very well-written poem about dreaming about the perfect prince charming that seems to side-step us in real life but certainly comes alive in our dreamworld and make us feel alive again. Lol.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx so much for the review, Sandra -- Have a wonderful week ahead dreaming up princes of your own -- you know, we 'girls' are never too old for them in our imagination! :) ;) Yvette :)
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Hahahaha only in the imagination for sure, I don't want someone to order me around. Lol.
Comment from damommy
What a wonderful experience, almost like being there with you, having sprites dance along with you and your handsome prince. Good meter and rhyme. I, too, have my own imaginary places to go when stressed. lol. Does that sound crazy?
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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What a wonderful experience, almost like being there with you, having sprites dance along with you and your handsome prince. Good meter and rhyme. I, too, have my own imaginary places to go when stressed. lol. Does that sound crazy?
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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That, my friend, is not crazy at all -- in fact, I would say it is quite healthy! :) Dwelling on the stress does NOTHING good for ANYONE -- dream, My Lady, Dream! :) :) Have a wonderful week ahead dreaming up princes of your own -- you know, we 'girls' are never too old for them in our imagination! :) ;) Yvette :)
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You're so right. Thanks.
Comment from tbacha58
OH WOW, this story in a poem, of course, is the winner. The picture described as if you are the one in it. The sentences follow your thoughts and feelings like the gentle waves in the ocean -- the dancing and dreaming while waiting for this feeling to last forever. Of course, the rhyming offers a different tune to the music. Good Luck. My six is yours to give you more happiness. Love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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OH WOW, this story in a poem, of course, is the winner. The picture described as if you are the one in it. The sentences follow your thoughts and feelings like the gentle waves in the ocean -- the dancing and dreaming while waiting for this feeling to last forever. Of course, the rhyming offers a different tune to the music. Good Luck. My six is yours to give you more happiness. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Oh, Terry - thank you, Thank You, THANK YOU for your awesome review -- your expressions are why I share all of my crazy blonde musings! :) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead dreaming up princes of your own -- we're never too old for them in our imagination! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from poetwatch
It seem so real. That fairy is there to steal the heart of the maiden, so fair and so wild, that Sprites glow in a breeze of the air. And lo and behold comes a prince to enchant and change that upside-down frown into a smile turned around. :) This is a good entry to Share A Story in a Poem contests. ;) :) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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It seem so real. That fairy is there to steal the heart of the maiden, so fair and so wild, that Sprites glow in a breeze of the air. And lo and behold comes a prince to enchant and change that upside-down frown into a smile turned around. :) This is a good entry to Share A Story in a Poem contests. ;) :) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Jose -- really appreciate your time and all of your wonderful comments! :) ;) You be sure to have a fantastical week of your own! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from Adri7enne
Hey, whatever works for you. If I had your fay prince, no doubt I'd be visiting him on a regular basis too. Lol! Lots of fairy characters and plenty of dancing sprites. It was a fun read. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Hey, whatever works for you. If I had your fay prince, no doubt I'd be visiting him on a regular basis too. Lol! Lots of fairy characters and plenty of dancing sprites. It was a fun read. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thanx for dropping by, Adri7enne -- great to hear from you! :) And glad you enjoyed my prince -- I don't share, but I'm sure you could come up with one of your own! :) :P LOL! Have a fantastic week ahead! :) Yvette
