They Beat as One
Sonnet50 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
A very beautiful poem. The imagery and description is fantastic and very well worded. Very nice flow to the poem too. Lovely photo too, lightning can be so awesome haha.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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A very beautiful poem. The imagery and description is fantastic and very well worded. Very nice flow to the poem too. Lovely photo too, lightning can be so awesome haha.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written sonnet you have penned for the Sonnet Poetry contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I saw no error or spags. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This is a very well written sonnet you have penned for the Sonnet Poetry contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I saw no error or spags. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you Teri for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ulla
Awe this is a wonderful sonnet, and also a wonderful love poem. It flows so very well and it has great imagery. I especially liked:
But then, a bolt of lightning streaks the sky
as thunder rolls throughout the distant hills.
A whirlwind of emotion takes me high
as pleasures of the moment bring new thrills.
This says it all. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Awe this is a wonderful sonnet, and also a wonderful love poem. It flows so very well and it has great imagery. I especially liked:
But then, a bolt of lightning streaks the sky
as thunder rolls throughout the distant hills.
A whirlwind of emotion takes me high
as pleasures of the moment bring new thrills.
This says it all. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you Ulla for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you for sharing your favorite part.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from country ranch writer
Fantasy can be beneficial in times of life as lightning strikes all around bringing with it an excitement rush into the moment.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Fantasy can be beneficial in times of life as lightning strikes all around bringing with it an excitement rush into the moment.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment from BeasPeas
This is a romantic sonnet, described and illustrated well. Nicely rhymed. I especially like the last stanza and ending couplet. Good luck in the contest with this well written piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This is a romantic sonnet, described and illustrated well. Nicely rhymed. I especially like the last stanza and ending couplet. Good luck in the contest with this well written piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you Marilyn for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I so pleased that your liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Oatmeal
JMF4119,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your arrangement looks very nice.
The flow was smooth. The theme was good. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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JMF4119,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your arrangement looks very nice.
The flow was smooth. The theme was good. Very descriptive and created impressions that are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you Oatmeal for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mastery
Hello again, Janet. I am so glad to see you back. I know you were definitely gone for a while. Your poetry was missed as were you.
This sonnet is a challenge for anyone else entering the contest. It
is a fine piece of writing from beginning to end:
"In dreamlike waves my heart begins to beat
in cadence with the passion in your eyes."
Very nice.
Blessings and good luck. Bob
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Hello again, Janet. I am so glad to see you back. I know you were definitely gone for a while. Your poetry was missed as were you.
This sonnet is a challenge for anyone else entering the contest. It
is a fine piece of writing from beginning to end:
"In dreamlike waves my heart begins to beat
in cadence with the passion in your eyes."
Very nice.
Blessings and good luck. Bob
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you Bob for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm always happy to see your review in my inbox. I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessing
Janet
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And I would be pleased to see your review in my inbox also, Janet. LOL Bob
Comment from Boogienights
I love sonnets! I have never written one but oh do I love reading them! This is so beautiful and romantic with such striking imagery. Than you for sharing this beautiful piece with us.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I love sonnets! I have never written one but oh do I love reading them! This is so beautiful and romantic with such striking imagery. Than you for sharing this beautiful piece with us.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for the extra special sixth star. You made my day.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Tootie
I really enjoyed this. Well-written and great presentation. The last line is perfect and I can feel the passion and conviction in them. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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I really enjoyed this. Well-written and great presentation. The last line is perfect and I can feel the passion and conviction in them. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you Cathy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm happy you liked this one.
Blessing
Janet
Comment from Shanbreen
You have kept well within the requirements of the sonnet. I liked the poem -- the rhyming seems to be quite natural. Here's wishing you many bolts of lightning and thunder. =)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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You have kept well within the requirements of the sonnet. I liked the poem -- the rhyming seems to be quite natural. Here's wishing you many bolts of lightning and thunder. =)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and the good wishes.
Blessing
Janet
