They Beat as One
Sonnet50 total reviews
Comment from Rickie1
Janet
I do like poetry that brings out emotion, especially me. I have to admit I'm a little embarrassed saying I like what you wrote to a women who wrote something so passionate and intimate. That's why it is so great. If it's not a winner it should be. Good job.
Rickie
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Janet
I do like poetry that brings out emotion, especially me. I have to admit I'm a little embarrassed saying I like what you wrote to a women who wrote something so passionate and intimate. That's why it is so great. If it's not a winner it should be. Good job.
Rickie
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Rickie for your thoughtful and encouraging review . I truly appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
A beautifully written sonnet to describe the beauty of true love and romance. You could have used this for the Valentine contest - in my opinion, too.
You managed to keep the meter, rhyme pattern, and syllable count - so I'm jealous. One of my goals this year is to write and post a sonnet. Thanks for showing me how its done,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hi there,
A beautifully written sonnet to describe the beauty of true love and romance. You could have used this for the Valentine contest - in my opinion, too.
You managed to keep the meter, rhyme pattern, and syllable count - so I'm jealous. One of my goals this year is to write and post a sonnet. Thanks for showing me how its done,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Patty for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
You should write a sonnet - I think you would be surprised at how well you would do. They are a challenge but fun.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gracie619
What an incredibly well written piece, of course, and one that brought some peace and tranquility to my work day. I took a break at work to read and enjoyed this so very much. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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What an incredibly well written piece, of course, and one that brought some peace and tranquility to my work day. I took a break at work to read and enjoyed this so very much. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Gracie for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from TPAC
I found the conclusion of this write very strong, capturing the whole prior conveyance completely, bring to the reader a precise stance of terms stated with this message. Pleasurable delights appealing to reader's interests in my opinion.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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I found the conclusion of this write very strong, capturing the whole prior conveyance completely, bring to the reader a precise stance of terms stated with this message. Pleasurable delights appealing to reader's interests in my opinion.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the warm sentiments here in your well rhymed and metered sonnet. The passion reaches the climax in the volta, when the bolt of lightning streaks the sky, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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I loved the warm sentiments here in your well rhymed and metered sonnet. The passion reaches the climax in the volta, when the bolt of lightning streaks the sky, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Dolly for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Karol Bond
Very beautiful. Love poetry is the best kind. I really enjoyed your poem and the image is perfect for the piece. I just love photos of lighting strikes and this one is beautiful. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Very beautiful. Love poetry is the best kind. I really enjoyed your poem and the image is perfect for the piece. I just love photos of lighting strikes and this one is beautiful. Great job.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Karol for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancyjam
This is so romantic and beautifully composed in perfect Sonnet form.
Gret rhyme and meter for pleasant read.
Good use of metaphor and imagery to convey emotions.I especially liked your
closing couplet.
Good luck in the contest,
Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is so romantic and beautifully composed in perfect Sonnet form.
Gret rhyme and meter for pleasant read.
Good use of metaphor and imagery to convey emotions.I especially liked your
closing couplet.
Good luck in the contest,
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Nancy for your thoughtful and encouraging review and the extra special sixth star. I'm so pleased that you liked this one. I appreciate your kind comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joan E.
Your sonnet is quite "dreamlike" and evocative. I admired your rhymes and presentation, plus your final line is memorable. Best wishes in the Sonnet Poetry Contest- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Your sonnet is quite "dreamlike" and evocative. I admired your rhymes and presentation, plus your final line is memorable. Best wishes in the Sonnet Poetry Contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Joan or your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent sonnet, descriptively and effectively paralleling the heat and drama of nature with that shared by two lovers. There is a pleasing blend
of reality and fantasy.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is an excellent sonnet, descriptively and effectively paralleling the heat and drama of nature with that shared by two lovers. There is a pleasing blend
of reality and fantasy.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Janice for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a lovely poem about romance and love told through the metaphor of those stormy, hot summer nights...nicely done. Your sonnet is well-written and is a good contest entry. I wish you lots of luck.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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What a lovely poem about romance and love told through the metaphor of those stormy, hot summer nights...nicely done. Your sonnet is well-written and is a good contest entry. I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you Cindy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
