Gentle Winds
After the storm42 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
The passing of friends leave an empty spot in our souls. I like this poem and wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings, Patricia
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The passing of friends leave an empty spot in our souls. I like this poem and wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely tribute to the sweet memories we have of loved ones who haves passed. Like a gentle breeze that leaves a final caress. I'm still swaying from the loss of three dear friends in the past four months. 'Til we meet again, I fondly wave. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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What a lovely tribute to the sweet memories we have of loved ones who haves passed. Like a gentle breeze that leaves a final caress. I'm still swaying from the loss of three dear friends in the past four months. 'Til we meet again, I fondly wave. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes losing friends is hard****kahpot
Comment from LIJ Red
I heard that trees flapping made the wind blow. We have autumn winds as well as March winds and I'll wager the trees hate to see the mild winds go, knowing that winter's coming...excellent five/seven/five
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I heard that trees flapping made the wind blow. We have autumn winds as well as March winds and I'll wager the trees hate to see the mild winds go, knowing that winter's coming...excellent five/seven/five
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and ai see where trees may have their concern****kahpot
Comment from Teresa Alford
This poem is well-written and thought out. It is good to have inspiration as you did with this poem. It meets the criteria. The story can be seen in the writing. Good job! TA. ";-)
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This poem is well-written and thought out. It is good to have inspiration as you did with this poem. It meets the criteria. The story can be seen in the writing. Good job! TA. ";-)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much and yes inspiration is very helpful****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
this very short poem is very deep and well messaged.. You have used cleo's work, she's the best. a fine 5-7-5 poem, meaningful, kahpot.................meeshu
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this very short poem is very deep and well messaged.. You have used cleo's work, she's the best. a fine 5-7-5 poem, meaningful, kahpot.................meeshu
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you meeshu, and yes cleo85 is very talented, I have used Her work many times****kahpot
Comment from Dan McCurdy
This is kind of fascinating in that it paints a picture where the moving branches and gentle winds are unrelated... the branches wave, the winds blow, but one is not causal of the other. Haikus are perfect for creating that sense of detachment, and that detachment helps to paint the picture of grief to honor your friend.
Nicely done.
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This is kind of fascinating in that it paints a picture where the moving branches and gentle winds are unrelated... the branches wave, the winds blow, but one is not causal of the other. Haikus are perfect for creating that sense of detachment, and that detachment helps to paint the picture of grief to honor your friend.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for this very understanding encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sentimental write about the winds of time passing us by and your attitude toward it here is one of sweet farewell as you stand firm and strong in its midst, your words are full of strength and determination, love Dolly x
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A sentimental write about the winds of time passing us by and your attitude toward it here is one of sweet farewell as you stand firm and strong in its midst, your words are full of strength and determination, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes memories always touch me****kahpot
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Kahpot, this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. All syllables are in check to convey a message of fleeting moments that can linger after they are gone. Nicely done on this enjoyable read. ~DD
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Kahpot, this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. All syllables are in check to convey a message of fleeting moments that can linger after they are gone. Nicely done on this enjoyable read. ~DD
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes the winds are a reminder****kahpot
Comment from TheStoryMan
A wonderfully written poem. Those we've lost will always sway us and we shall always wave goodbye as does the branches of the trees when the wind moves through them. It's a lovely sentiment. Good luck in your contest.
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A wonderfully written poem. Those we've lost will always sway us and we shall always wave goodbye as does the branches of the trees when the wind moves through them. It's a lovely sentiment. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for understanding, this is what I meant, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a heart-touching 5-7-5 you've written. I love the sentiment of those gone as wind blowing through the trees and waving goodbye. A lovely poem. Your format is perfection. This is a solid contest entry. I hope you do well.
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What a heart-touching 5-7-5 you've written. I love the sentiment of those gone as wind blowing through the trees and waving goodbye. A lovely poem. Your format is perfection. This is a solid contest entry. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, for this very encouraging review****kahpot
