Gentle Winds
After the storm42 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Lovely images and a sense of tranquility and harmony make this 5-7-5 a very pleasant read. A season is ending and Nature approves.
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Lovely images and a sense of tranquility and harmony make this 5-7-5 a very pleasant read. A season is ending and Nature approves.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this 5-75 poem. I found it very moving. It flows so well portraying such a meaningful message. I wish you good luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen
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I really like this 5-75 poem. I found it very moving. It flows so well portraying such a meaningful message. I wish you good luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for this great review and luck****kahpot
Comment from Miss Sherry
Perfection. A poem that say volumes with few words. Artwork is just the thing...it mutes the sadness and leads the reader to a deep sigh of regret for the passing. You have done a stunning job with this beautiful offering.
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Perfection. A poem that say volumes with few words. Artwork is just the thing...it mutes the sadness and leads the reader to a deep sigh of regret for the passing. You have done a stunning job with this beautiful offering.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, your feedback is much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. This poem is such a mood piece. Creates a wonderful feeling for a natural phenomenon that we never see but certainly see the results. Gentle and caressing are great descriptors. I love it when the wind also says hello. Hugh
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Excellent. This poem is such a mood piece. Creates a wonderful feeling for a natural phenomenon that we never see but certainly see the results. Gentle and caressing are great descriptors. I love it when the wind also says hello. Hugh
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I think the wind has many words****kahpot
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
Very nicely done. I think one of the hardest poems to write is the short one as one can see when he or she reads mine. I like the word "Caressing" in the second line. A very appropriate choice for your description. Excellent work. Cowboy
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Very nicely done. I think one of the hardest poems to write is the short one as one can see when he or she reads mine. I like the word "Caressing" in the second line. A very appropriate choice for your description. Excellent work. Cowboy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you and many thanks for letting me know what has worked****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As we age, so more of our loved ones and friends leave us to go on their next journey. This is a lovely poem of farewell, Kahpot, and a well written 5-7-5 contest entry. I wish you lots of luck. :)) Sandra xx
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As we age, so more of our loved ones and friends leave us to go on their next journey. This is a lovely poem of farewell, Kahpot, and a well written 5-7-5 contest entry. I wish you lots of luck. :)) Sandra xx
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely 5-7-5 makes effective of every syllable and reminds me of a passage in the Bible that speaks of how the wind blows where it pleases. The artwork is thought-provoking.
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This lovely 5-7-5 makes effective of every syllable and reminds me of a passage in the Bible that speaks of how the wind blows where it pleases. The artwork is thought-provoking.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
Poignant picture and verse
like especially images:
winds caressing treetops
'wave farewell'
Honestly for this 5-7-5 verse, I'd drop entirely the capitalization; at minimum, just for 'Winds.'
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Poignant picture and verse
like especially images:
winds caressing treetops
'wave farewell'
Honestly for this 5-7-5 verse, I'd drop entirely the capitalization; at minimum, just for 'Winds.'
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much and I have dropped all capitals, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Fizzz
I love the image this conjures up in my mind. The idea of the wind racing on, never to return and the personification of the trees waving goodbye as if they were friends for just a moment. Lovely
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I love the image this conjures up in my mind. The idea of the wind racing on, never to return and the personification of the trees waving goodbye as if they were friends for just a moment. Lovely
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for this great review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 to encourage and comfort us who lost someone dear to our hearts to find them in the gentle breezes of the wind and here them whispering to us.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 to encourage and comfort us who lost someone dear to our hearts to find them in the gentle breezes of the wind and here them whispering to us.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes it is comforting to hear them****kahpot
