-Celestial Integrity-
Free verse7 total reviews
Comment from beencounter
I especially liked the phrase, "capturing the solstice of the devine." It brings a fabulous word picture. In my humble opinion, the poem could carry even more impact if written in an active tense. For example, "absolute integrity forming and capturing the solstice of the devine" could be changed to "absolute integrity that forms and captures the solstice of the devine" or something like that. Just a thought. Also I believe the word is "divine" instead of "devine."
Hope this review is helpful.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I especially liked the phrase, "capturing the solstice of the devine." It brings a fabulous word picture. In my humble opinion, the poem could carry even more impact if written in an active tense. For example, "absolute integrity forming and capturing the solstice of the devine" could be changed to "absolute integrity that forms and captures the solstice of the devine" or something like that. Just a thought. Also I believe the word is "divine" instead of "devine."
Hope this review is helpful.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Wow, another good lesson, thanks for the heads up!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are a true romantic Gordon and your words are wistful and loving, you have created a serene ambiance in your words, best wishes . . . love Dolly x
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You are a true romantic Gordon and your words are wistful and loving, you have created a serene ambiance in your words, best wishes . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Why thank you for the unexpected compliment, many blessings unto you as well!
Comment from Earl Corp
My takeaway from your poem is that Your love is as steadfast as a rock. It can't be shaken or fall. I'm not sure what seeing the Heaven's rise within you means though. Nice job.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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My takeaway from your poem is that Your love is as steadfast as a rock. It can't be shaken or fall. I'm not sure what seeing the Heaven's rise within you means though. Nice job.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the great review friend. I did enjoy making a stand for Jesus Christ. It is wonderful.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Celestrial Integrity, seems to develop from the acceptance of faith, another person's heart, and the glorifying occurrences forthcoming after that.
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This free verse, Celestrial Integrity, seems to develop from the acceptance of faith, another person's heart, and the glorifying occurrences forthcoming after that.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you kindly for the in-depth review. I hope to catch your attention once again friend.
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Well spoken, those three factors were in my mind while writing this piece!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free verse about celestial integrity. You used very good descriptive words. I love when you mentioned faith, grace and mercy. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written free verse about celestial integrity. You used very good descriptive words. I love when you mentioned faith, grace and mercy. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you ever so kindly for the great review friend. I hope to catch your attention once more.
Comment from royowen
"Without faith it is impossible to please God." So it is indeed the mechanism that creates something from nothing, it's how Jesus walked on water, raised the dead, healed the sick, and rescued us from tyrannical sin. Beautifully written Gordon, in words of the wordsmith's grasp on beauty. Well dine, blessings, Roy
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"Without faith it is impossible to please God." So it is indeed the mechanism that creates something from nothing, it's how Jesus walked on water, raised the dead, healed the sick, and rescued us from tyrannical sin. Beautifully written Gordon, in words of the wordsmith's grasp on beauty. Well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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As a fellow writer I do hope to enlighten others.
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Absolutey
Comment from QC Poet
To be able to grasp that celestial integrity is what most people strive for in life. Thank you for sharing this poetic message.
God Bless you for sharing the poem.
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To be able to grasp that celestial integrity is what most people strive for in life. Thank you for sharing this poetic message.
God Bless you for sharing the poem.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Yes, it is vital to form this integrity in life.
