Unexpected Gifts
the treasure of the moment30 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
Love this - guess I say that a lot, but I do... That pop of red is so pretty and eye-catching. Every day needs some glam ...you are very good at these!!
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Love this - guess I say that a lot, but I do... That pop of red is so pretty and eye-catching. Every day needs some glam ...you are very good at these!!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hello, OP.... I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
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Gorgeous!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Such a short one! Your red umbrella is certainly bright. I too appreciate the gift of something unique to happen on any day!
At this moment, it is sunny, windy, and about 35 - not quite a dull day. LOL
Mark
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Melissa,
Such a short one! Your red umbrella is certainly bright. I too appreciate the gift of something unique to happen on any day!
At this moment, it is sunny, windy, and about 35 - not quite a dull day. LOL
Mark
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you, Mark.
Melissa
Comment from Six-Star Writer
This is a very uplifting thought since there are so many dull days lately. I am seldom happy in winter. It was warmer where I grew up, but I haven't been back there for about 20 years.
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This is a very uplifting thought since there are so many dull days lately. I am seldom happy in winter. It was warmer where I grew up, but I haven't been back there for about 20 years.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hey, Beatpoet... I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. I hope it brightened your day. Thank you.
Melissa
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Yes it did, sweet Melissa.
Comment from William Ross
Nicely done on the one line poem. It does take only one bright moment to light up a dull day. great job, Good luck on the contest and have a wonderful new year ahead.
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Nicely done on the one line poem. It does take only one bright moment to light up a dull day. great job, Good luck on the contest and have a wonderful new year ahead.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Insider98
Though it's only one line, this is very wise. Unfortunately, there are dull days, but we must recognise the beautiful moments that reside within them. The picture is a perfect choice for this theme. Great job and good luck! Cheers
Insider98
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Though it's only one line, this is very wise. Unfortunately, there are dull days, but we must recognise the beautiful moments that reside within them. The picture is a perfect choice for this theme. Great job and good luck! Cheers
Insider98
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Melissa. Your picture choice is perfect. The red umbrella stands out as a reminder that even on dull days, there are many things to be happy about. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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This is a great contest entry, Melissa. Your picture choice is perfect. The red umbrella stands out as a reminder that even on dull days, there are many things to be happy about. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Mimi Linny
Your chosen photo accentuates the brightness, beauty and meaning of your one line poem. Very nicely done! Great job - and wishing you much luck in the contest!
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Your chosen photo accentuates the brightness, beauty and meaning of your one line poem. Very nicely done! Great job - and wishing you much luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from RichardFann
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Sugarray77,
I'm out of 6*s so needed to do my best with 5*s.
Thanks for this poem and the brill red pic.
What can you do with one line?
Well you cheered me up.
We need encouragement to look on the bright side, and this is it.
Well done.
Richard.
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Sugarray77,
I'm out of 6*s so needed to do my best with 5*s.
Thanks for this poem and the brill red pic.
What can you do with one line?
Well you cheered me up.
We need encouragement to look on the bright side, and this is it.
Well done.
Richard.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Awwww, Richard, I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
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You are the fastest keyboard in the West!
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Haha... you are a hoot!
M
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem. A splash of bright color in a dark and grey background lights up the whole picture. It gives the picture a spark of light.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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A very well-written one-line poem. A splash of bright color in a dark and grey background lights up the whole picture. It gives the picture a spark of light.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks a bunch, Sandra for the lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much wisdom in these words and spoken like a true optimist Melissa, all we have to do is look for those sparkling gems in the mud, best wishes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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There is much wisdom in these words and spoken like a true optimist Melissa, all we have to do is look for those sparkling gems in the mud, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am glad you like my little one liner... I just looked at that red umbrella and thought what an emotional lift/gift that would be on a rainy day.. Thank you.
Melissa
