Funny Honey
Viewing comments for Chapter 99 "The Crude Dudes."A Witty Ditty Anthology
3 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Rhonnie,
So it's not the REAL Victoria's Secret? It's a GIRL named 'Victoria'? That confused me a little, I have to be honest. Otherwise, this piece was well written, and it was nice to look on the guy's side of things for a change. *smile* Thanks~!
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Rhonnie,
So it's not the REAL Victoria's Secret? It's a GIRL named 'Victoria'? That confused me a little, I have to be honest. Otherwise, this piece was well written, and it was nice to look on the guy's side of things for a change. *smile* Thanks~!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
Comment from Donka Kristeva
The dialogues are quite entertaining, the wording, humorous, made me smile But the end was the surprise and the "star" of this work. I think a good story is one that is interesting till the end, but the end is unexpected.
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The dialogues are quite entertaining, the wording, humorous, made me smile But the end was the surprise and the "star" of this work. I think a good story is one that is interesting till the end, but the end is unexpected.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
Comment from Raul1
This story is funny and good. I find it sort of comical. It can be written better. Otherwise, I like this story, because it is good. Thanks for sharing! Nice work!
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This story is funny and good. I find it sort of comical. It can be written better. Otherwise, I like this story, because it is good. Thanks for sharing! Nice work!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
