My Own Front Door
A poem.26 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
My takeaway is that the writer and his brother have become a part of the door. While that may be odd, it's not the wierdest thing I ever read on here. This poem hit all four of my criteria I rate poetry on. It rhymes, makes sense, it's spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader.
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My takeaway is that the writer and his brother have become a part of the door. While that may be odd, it's not the wierdest thing I ever read on here. This poem hit all four of my criteria I rate poetry on. It rhymes, makes sense, it's spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem we often wonder how it will all end and sometimes we have a dream that may tell us the secrets that will still come, but we cannot always understand our dreams.
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem we often wonder how it will all end and sometimes we have a dream that may tell us the secrets that will still come, but we cannot always understand our dreams.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Wow that must be quite a door to have twenty four window panes. I'd love to see a picture of that door. It rhymes well, though :) This is a fascinating story poem. Well written with great rhymes, and vivid imagery.
Joy xx
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Wow that must be quite a door to have twenty four window panes. I'd love to see a picture of that door. It rhymes well, though :) This is a fascinating story poem. Well written with great rhymes, and vivid imagery.
Joy xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from Artasylum
The cave that is your words... no bottom found and your word on brains well, well... truly sound kiddo... Do you speak like you write... crazy good as ever... looking forward. yours, diana
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The cave that is your words... no bottom found and your word on brains well, well... truly sound kiddo... Do you speak like you write... crazy good as ever... looking forward. yours, diana
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from Kiera Haley
Wow, this is great! From the concept to the diction to the rhyme scheme, all of it is very well done. The rhyming seems very natural and the diction helps with the creepy and ominous tone. The story moves at a steady pace and keeps readers intrigued throughout the poem. Love it!
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Wow, this is great! From the concept to the diction to the rhyme scheme, all of it is very well done. The rhyming seems very natural and the diction helps with the creepy and ominous tone. The story moves at a steady pace and keeps readers intrigued throughout the poem. Love it!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from prettybluebirds
This poem is exceptional and well-written. this is the type of poetry I prefer to read. While I'm not a poet myself, I do love the old style poetry that seems to have a beat to it. I enjoyed every word of this.
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This poem is exceptional and well-written. this is the type of poetry I prefer to read. While I'm not a poet myself, I do love the old style poetry that seems to have a beat to it. I enjoyed every word of this.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
