Cracker Croakers (A Talk Show)
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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Brett. You've found a clever way to deliver information on various tracking systems. With technology, it's less and less easy to get "lost" even if one desires to do so.
I believe there is a typo here:
"particularly if you us (use) them for the wrong reasons."
another one to check out is:
"Candice: One big no-no (is the use of) are (delete are) spying apps. These allow the tracking"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Hi Brett. You've found a clever way to deliver information on various tracking systems. With technology, it's less and less easy to get "lost" even if one desires to do so.
I believe there is a typo here:
"particularly if you us (use) them for the wrong reasons."
another one to check out is:
"Candice: One big no-no (is the use of) are (delete are) spying apps. These allow the tracking"
Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Appreciate you catching that typo. On occasion, one can read a piece of writing multiple times and still not see them.
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I agree about reading many times and missing our own typos. :) Marilyn
Comment from robyn corum
Brett,
Nicely done! It is amazing what can be done now with electronic tracking, isn't it? I do know that police are able to place GPS devices on peoples' cars in certain situations and that's a wee bit scary, isn't it? Though - only the bad guys, thank heavens!!
I only saw one tiny little nit:
--> particularly if you us(e) them for the wrong reasons.
Looking forward to the next edition -- thanks!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Brett,
Nicely done! It is amazing what can be done now with electronic tracking, isn't it? I do know that police are able to place GPS devices on peoples' cars in certain situations and that's a wee bit scary, isn't it? Though - only the bad guys, thank heavens!!
I only saw one tiny little nit:
--> particularly if you us(e) them for the wrong reasons.
Looking forward to the next edition -- thanks!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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As always, appreciate the insights, comments, and review.
Comment from damommy
This is very interesting. Since I fall a lot, I wear a medical alert pendant that also has GPS so I can be located wherever I am. I didn't know there's a GPS that goes in one's shoe sole. What will they think of next? It would ensure that it's never taken off and left somewhere.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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This is very interesting. Since I fall a lot, I wear a medical alert pendant that also has GPS so I can be located wherever I am. I didn't know there's a GPS that goes in one's shoe sole. What will they think of next? It would ensure that it's never taken off and left somewhere.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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As always, appreciate the insights, comments, and review.
Comment from Graybærd
I am slightly confused at the name "Cracker Croakers". I will have to read more, (Yes, I looked up at the blue numbers when they told me too, sigh). With that said...
I liked it. The script flowed well, and the characters worked well together. I did like the subject matter too but I am a card carrying member if the Geek society.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I am slightly confused at the name "Cracker Croakers". I will have to read more, (Yes, I looked up at the blue numbers when they told me too, sigh). With that said...
I liked it. The script flowed well, and the characters worked well together. I did like the subject matter too but I am a card carrying member if the Geek society.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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As always, appreciate the insights, comments, and review.
Comment from royowen
I really enjoyed your script Brett, highly entertaining and deftly scribed to good affect, I'm sure the modern cellphones can violate a whole lot of things they're apnot supposed, so called freedom, is a shrinking flower. Well done, good scripting Brett, a good job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I really enjoyed your script Brett, highly entertaining and deftly scribed to good affect, I'm sure the modern cellphones can violate a whole lot of things they're apnot supposed, so called freedom, is a shrinking flower. Well done, good scripting Brett, a good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Appreciate you taking the time to read it and pen a review.
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Most welcome
Comment from melodymavic
What a good talk shows. So both of them talked about pros and cons about GPS which is interesting. I can imagine the sound effects and their energetic voice.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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What a good talk shows. So both of them talked about pros and cons about GPS which is interesting. I can imagine the sound effects and their energetic voice.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Appreciate you taking the time to read it and pen a review.
Comment from Sam Saylor
This was a dive into a topic of interest and candice and colton lead me through it in a very rewarding fashion. Multiple angles, perspectives and the banter bounces naturally and enjoyably. Unlike in my last review of crackers croakers where i questioned the shortness, I am this time left feeling satisfied.
5 stars
Boom!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This was a dive into a topic of interest and candice and colton lead me through it in a very rewarding fashion. Multiple angles, perspectives and the banter bounces naturally and enjoyably. Unlike in my last review of crackers croakers where i questioned the shortness, I am this time left feeling satisfied.
5 stars
Boom!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Also, pleased to know the topic was of interest. Wasn't sure it would fit the format but decided to pen the script any way. So, thanks for the vote of confidence.
