Falling Rain
A Nonet56 total reviews
Comment from Miss Sherry
I love that you posted this...I want to try the form and learn best by site, not written instruction. It puts me in mind of a tornado...just my observation. Very pretty artwork chosen for this write.
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I love that you posted this...I want to try the form and learn best by site, not written instruction. It puts me in mind of a tornado...just my observation. Very pretty artwork chosen for this write.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you and yes have a go it really is fun****kahpot
Comment from Teri7
Kahpot, This is a very well written Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work. I love reading about nature and things that happen. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Kahpot, This is a very well written Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work. I love reading about nature and things that happen. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was really fun****kahpot
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Good nonet. As a nature lover, I like how you summarize nature's business with a smart election of words. Sometimes, I may complain about rainy days, but your last two lines are reminders of what a fortune rain is.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Good nonet. As a nature lover, I like how you summarize nature's business with a smart election of words. Sometimes, I may complain about rainy days, but your last two lines are reminders of what a fortune rain is.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from QC Poet
This also is a Great cycle of rebirth poem.
Formic picturesque messaging and phrasing.
A joyful read.
Thank you for sharing,
God Bless you and your family.
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This also is a Great cycle of rebirth poem.
Formic picturesque messaging and phrasing.
A joyful read.
Thank you for sharing,
God Bless you and your family.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, as the rebirth was what I tried for****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
"new life nestles
falling rain
natures
gain"
Very well stated, kahpot You are definitely in touch with nature in this poetry. I wish you the bes tof luck in the contest with this nonet.
Bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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"new life nestles
falling rain
natures
gain"
Very well stated, kahpot You are definitely in touch with nature in this poetry. I wish you the bes tof luck in the contest with this nonet.
Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I love nature****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
you finished it off nicely, these things usually end with a sentence broken into three or four pieces (lazy). getting the last part right is the hardest part. great job, kahpot...................meeshu
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you finished it off nicely, these things usually end with a sentence broken into three or four pieces (lazy). getting the last part right is the hardest part. great job, kahpot...................meeshu
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you and I thought if I was going to have a go it would be a waste to be lazy****kahpot
