Hummingbird Dreams
nature's gift18 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
What a sweet story in a poem. Hummingbirds are friendly when they get to know you. I've experienced such happenings with my hummers, too. Nice job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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What a sweet story in a poem. Hummingbirds are friendly when they get to know you. I've experienced such happenings with my hummers, too. Nice job. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you mermaids for such a wonderful free style poem about a humming bird along with your authors note
One of you patient's was telling you how she met her husband and when a hummingbird sat on his shoulder, she knew he was the one, makes me wish that the four humming
birds we see feeding from the nectar we have by our deck.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Smiles to you mermaids for such a wonderful free style poem about a humming bird along with your authors note
One of you patient's was telling you how she met her husband and when a hummingbird sat on his shoulder, she knew he was the one, makes me wish that the four humming
birds we see feeding from the nectar we have by our deck.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, it is a delightful bird tale. Elaine
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You are so welcome Elaine (mermaids)
Gert
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
So the hummingbird became a honeymoon bird! So romantic, too. It's funny, isn't it, how the tale of someone sometimes trigger us to write a poem? I can really imagine this man with a little bird on his shoulder.
Lovely poem!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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So the hummingbird became a honeymoon bird! So romantic, too. It's funny, isn't it, how the tale of someone sometimes trigger us to write a poem? I can really imagine this man with a little bird on his shoulder.
Lovely poem!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine
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so welcome!
Comment from Pantygynt
A tiny bit of nature creates a moment of decision in nine lines of neat free verse. This is lovely and captures the magic of the moment so succinctly in so few words. Lovely.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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A tiny bit of nature creates a moment of decision in nine lines of neat free verse. This is lovely and captures the magic of the moment so succinctly in so few words. Lovely.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Hummingbird dreams come true, a hummingbird sat on a handsome man's shoulder and later he became your husband; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Hummingbird dreams come true, a hummingbird sat on a handsome man's shoulder and later he became your husband; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Y. M. Roger
So many different instances of the little ones doing a 'choosing' of sorts -- very cool free verse that depicts just that for us! :) Thanx for sharing that ray of light, my lady! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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So many different instances of the little ones doing a 'choosing' of sorts -- very cool free verse that depicts just that for us! :) Thanx for sharing that ray of light, my lady! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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I appreciate your thoughtful comments about my poem. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from roof35
What a neat story. I guess I would think someone was pretty special if a bird was on his shoulder, too. This poem is unique and well written. It is nicely done.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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What a neat story. I guess I would think someone was pretty special if a bird was on his shoulder, too. This poem is unique and well written. It is nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much.
Comment from joycetreasures
Top of the day to you, Mermaids.
I pray you are doing well these days. This is such a cute romantic story how a little hummingbird landed on your patient's husband. And, she felt that meant he was going to be her husband. How romantic? I love these types of love stories. Yes, a gift from mother nature. This is a lovely love story. Enjoyable read. Nice title for your poem. Thanks for sharing. Well-penned. Happy writing:-) No errors.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Top of the day to you, Mermaids.
I pray you are doing well these days. This is such a cute romantic story how a little hummingbird landed on your patient's husband. And, she felt that meant he was going to be her husband. How romantic? I love these types of love stories. Yes, a gift from mother nature. This is a lovely love story. Enjoyable read. Nice title for your poem. Thanks for sharing. Well-penned. Happy writing:-) No errors.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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I appreciate your thoughtful review. Thanks so much and have a great day.
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You are so welcome. Have a bless day.
Comment from Alchera
a bird so small, yet
large in spirit
he rests upon a
handsome man's
shoulder,
he is now mine
the tiny red
being gives
me my mate
Well written throughout its poetical free line versification and curious and unusual story lined content. I really thought that hummingbirds would never accept being handly by men.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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a bird so small, yet
large in spirit
he rests upon a
handsome man's
shoulder,
he is now mine
the tiny red
being gives
me my mate
Well written throughout its poetical free line versification and curious and unusual story lined content. I really thought that hummingbirds would never accept being handly by men.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Elaine
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Blessings and welcome! Tony
Comment from Mark D. R.
delightful verse acoompanied beija-flor ('hummingbird' in Portuguese) illustration
do like the imagery of your verse
'large in spirit' - excellent description of that small bird's possibility
one never knows when a tap on a shoulder opens up a new future or a world to explore
suggestion: increase your font size from current FS default (my guess it is 12 point type) IMHO, there are many FS reviewers who have visual acuity issues who may have trouble 'seeing' your text and therefore may not take the time to read, rate, and review your FS posts
it will not detract from your overall presentation
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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delightful verse acoompanied beija-flor ('hummingbird' in Portuguese) illustration
do like the imagery of your verse
'large in spirit' - excellent description of that small bird's possibility
one never knows when a tap on a shoulder opens up a new future or a world to explore
suggestion: increase your font size from current FS default (my guess it is 12 point type) IMHO, there are many FS reviewers who have visual acuity issues who may have trouble 'seeing' your text and therefore may not take the time to read, rate, and review your FS posts
it will not detract from your overall presentation
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Yes, I agree. I should increase the font size. Thanks for your suggestion and taking time to read and review. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
