Flamingo
a 5 7 5 poem5 total reviews
Comment from Jaye Bennett
You have definitely nailed the flamingo. So glad you could find a picture of one that had been getting enough calcium. (That's where the pink comes from.) Very good job.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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You have definitely nailed the flamingo. So glad you could find a picture of one that had been getting enough calcium. (That's where the pink comes from.) Very good job.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. Cheers, j
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Yeah, and I like how they stand on one leg. That's so cool. They must have great balance. If I stand on one leg too long, I'll fall down. I heard they're pink because they eat shrimp.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Yeah, and I like how they stand on one leg. That's so cool. They must have great balance. If I stand on one leg too long, I'll fall down. I heard they're pink because they eat shrimp.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review, j
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your 575 bird contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like your description of the flamingo--very fitting. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed your 575 bird contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like your description of the flamingo--very fitting. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Jan. Cheers, j
Comment from mermaids
I think this is the first poem I have read about a flamingo. You capture their essence in your words, they do seem to be stars on display. Excellent use of words to capture this beautiful bird.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I think this is the first poem I have read about a flamingo. You capture their essence in your words, they do seem to be stars on display. Excellent use of words to capture this beautiful bird.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review. Cheers judester
Comment from Earl Corp
I had a geography professor in college who showed us slide shows of places he'd bee. On every slide show he had a plastic Flamingo "Pinky whi might pop up on the beaches of Hawaii or in a glen in Ireland, it was great fun.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I had a geography professor in college who showed us slide shows of places he'd bee. On every slide show he had a plastic Flamingo "Pinky whi might pop up on the beaches of Hawaii or in a glen in Ireland, it was great fun.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Too funny. I did the same with Bill the cat. Biker bars in Key West, sunset in Bahamas, hiking long trail in Vermont. Way too much free time. Thanks for your review. Cheers, judester
