Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Hi, if the whole world would read this poem, our today would always be a delighted and prosperous one. Your expression is so down to earth, so confident, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you all the best Ricky, and you have suffered so much. God Bless You and gives you strength. Thank you. Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019

Thanks Terry and watch closely...
As I (Eye)
Heat Up this Site.
Rick...

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019

To Suffer or not to Suffer?
That is not the question but the "Reality in Me."
Thanks Dear Terry....
Ricky....

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This poem seems to be a little lighthearted as opposed to your usual writings. I found a couple of points you might want to reedit:
1. There should be they're.
2. You seem to be capitalizing words at will in the middle of sentences not just at the beginning or proper nouns.
Nice job,.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Words I feel of importance like "god" God
Hey capitalized
SD for grammar..
I dometumea talk into my device and don't always use spell check.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024.

Comment from Marc Grimaldi

Excellent

A very crafty play on words, using the titles of many horror movies. Interesting and unique, nothing like I've ever read before. Keep up the good writing!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Thanks Marc and have a Blessed More. Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basicly sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember.... LEARNING IS EARNING

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

hi Susan when it comes to reviews I've been butchered because a lot of people don't understand my work don't believe it or can't go to the depths level when I write a basic long basic on theme and imagery injective object of content and descriptive measures I never take points away for grammar content is the most important there's young people on this site they need encouragement they don't need two and three-star reviews just because they're grammar order poetry sucks dr. Ricky 1024

reply by susand3022 on 11-Jan-2019

Dear Ricky, While I too can't realize the depths of your inventiveness, I do have two definate things to tell you about that will help you greatly here. The first is that you don't need to, and shouldn't put, your title and any other information reguarding the poem in the area that the poem goes into. All of this information is already in other places or can be put into Author's notes. I wasn't sure where your poem actually started and where your information ended.
The other suggestion I have for you is an app. It's the most wonderful tool I have at my disposal when I write, it's called Grammarly. It's free, just download it and make sure it's running when you're writing. It will take care of any little gramatical mistakes you may have or spelling errors. It will also suggest any corrections in sentence structure. You can also build the dictionary if you are building a fantasy world or something of that sort. It's a great app. I hope I have been of some help to you in an encouraging, non-critical way. Keep exploring your mind in your writing! Keep the nay-sayers at bay! Susan

Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

I like all of the lines listed with their sources, the allusions, puns. Then, the tests. The tests on Mom. The author brings up all kinds of possibilities. Then it's see you next time. Well done. I will be back to see what the doctor found. I, too, like to be scared. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Thanks Miss Bennet it will be completed a little later on this they talked to Ricky 1024

reply by Jaye Bennett on 09-Jan-2019

I will be back. Have to find out what happens.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Hi, Ricky. It's been a while since I read any of your work and this one is excellent as usual. I haven't been around for a while because my husband and friend of thirty-eight years passed away on the 1st of December. I miss him dreadfully but intend to continue reading and writing soon.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

My deepest condolences.
It2 been a Widower now for over fifteen years.
Journal know and release.
Time will heal.
Medications,friends, doctors, Priests, therapista...
Time is the Master.
Cures the Scars and release2a the depression.
Doctor Ricky 1024Ranks and this will be a test of Discovery...
Self Worth
Realization of why we are here.
And change...
Thanks,
Rick

Comment from Artasylum

Exceptional

I love your writing it is always such a standout... every verse is compelling... looking forward to reading your work all through 2019... looking so forward... love, diana...

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Always a pleasure.
Doctor Ricky 1024