Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You have it all here Bill and your write is inventive and uplifting, something to aspire to and bulding blocks of life, much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from WryWriter

Exceptional

F6 reminds me of military ratings. I like your 6 word art choice. Fits perfectly with your 6 word poem. There is much truth in those simple six words. Not much by themselves, but when an artist such as yourself puts them together...such a powerful poem. Love it!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thank you, WW

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Bill
Very clever. The National Lisp Society has complained, which is a good sign.
It is very difficult to work with only six words - and harder still to stand out, but this is 'different' and it might catch the eye of the committee for that.
I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thank you, Phil. I hope you?re right.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That is the most alliterative six word poem! I like your title. I didn't think you meant the guitar chord but didn't know if it was a military reference. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Good deal. I like this poem the way it's beginning all the words with the same letter. This is probably the best six word poem i've seen. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019

Thanks, Earl

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

I have three novels to get back to: Pale Sisters, Baker's Dozen, and I think I'll expand on Final Exercise.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

Was wondering what folks would come up with for this. Most excellent!! Boo yah, or whatever, heard that from Al Pacino in a movie. God bless you for being a marine, sir!!

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019

Thanks,OP.

reply by Miss Sherry on 07-Jan-2019

Yes, sir!

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019

Thank you, OP. Al Pacino played a blind and retired 1st or 82nd Airborne officer in that movie, Scent of a Woman. "Ooo Ahhh" is how they usually sound. You'll hear Marines say either "Ooh Rah!" loudly, "Ooh rah" in a speaking voice, denoting a positive commentary, or 'ooh rah' accompanied by an eye roll to indicate false enthusiasm.

reply by Miss Sherry on 09-Jan-2019

Thank you for explaining the chant... that was the movie I was thinking of, but mind had been super-glued by chaos in household. One caregiver, two cats and neighbors, phone calls from solicitors...