Cracker Croakers (A Talk Show)
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Cracker Croakers"The only Talk Show on FanStory
5 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basicly sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember.... LEARNING IS EARNING
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basicly sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember.... LEARNING IS EARNING
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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If you don't like my writing come out and say so. I am a professional Freelance Writer by trade, and have been for about 30 years. It's how I make my living. So, there's not much I haven't heard or been told over the years. However, I would ask for the courtesy of not being placed on some list.
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Hi Brett, Having read this episode of Cracker Croakers, I see nothing that is screaming out at me, "FIX ME!" These types of writes aren't normally my cup of tea though and I usually just pass them by opting not to review them. So, that said, it was fine, no errors, gramatical mistakes, sentences that felt awkward or anything of that nature. :)
Comment from Jaye Bennett
This is great. The writer has passed along a great deal of information, just as a talk show would have done. From the beginning where GAC for water purification was mentioned, through the whole section on "streaming," I was soaking up info. That said, since it is a talk show, I wonder if "readers" is the correct word for the audience. I simply don't know. What I do know is, when I read "readers," it stopped me in my tracks. The picture appears appropriate, at least for now. I'm looking forward to the next program. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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This is great. The writer has passed along a great deal of information, just as a talk show would have done. From the beginning where GAC for water purification was mentioned, through the whole section on "streaming," I was soaking up info. That said, since it is a talk show, I wonder if "readers" is the correct word for the audience. I simply don't know. What I do know is, when I read "readers," it stopped me in my tracks. The picture appears appropriate, at least for now. I'm looking forward to the next program. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Appreciate you taking the time to read it and pen a review.
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You're welcome.
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I appreciate how difficult it can be to write dialogue. Making it a radio show makes a little easier, but there is no way to play around with narrative. You are helping me learn.
Comment from Abby Baker
How fun! I didn't know anything like this existed! You certainly have a talent for script writing. This was fun, engaging, and informative. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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How fun! I didn't know anything like this existed! You certainly have a talent for script writing. This was fun, engaging, and informative. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this edition of Cracker Croakers. Appreciate you taking the time to read it and pen a review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I don't know where you came up with this idea but it is creative and interesting. A talk show on FanStory, what next? I will watch for more. This is nicely done and a great idea.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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I don't know where you came up with this idea but it is creative and interesting. A talk show on FanStory, what next? I will watch for more. This is nicely done and a great idea.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this Talk Show edition. Appreciate your comments and the review very much. Learning script writing is one of my goals for 2019. Much more to come so stay tuned.
Comment from apky
Hello Brett, and Happy New Year!
This is extremely well written and engaging. Many a moment I almost gave up, not because I wasn't enjoying the story, but because scripts aren't my Sunday best. But I failed each time around because the story wouldn't let me go.
Just like in all your writing, you're passionate and it shows.
Wish I had a six left...
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Hello Brett, and Happy New Year!
This is extremely well written and engaging. Many a moment I almost gave up, not because I wasn't enjoying the story, but because scripts aren't my Sunday best. But I failed each time around because the story wouldn't let me go.
Just like in all your writing, you're passionate and it shows.
Wish I had a six left...
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Appreciate you taking the time to read this script and review it. Glad you enjoyed the script. I will be writing this Talk Show daily. One of my goals this year is to become a better script writer and I decided this format would allow me to get there.
