Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A good interpretation of the pix for this post. Drinking can spark silly arguments that ruin relationships. Your last three lines in this free verse sum it up. Good job with this poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks, it?s really all I could interpret from the given picture! I?m glad you enjoyed reading my version!
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

I've seen a few of these thus far, Trisha, but yours is the one that has really left an impression -- I really love your pained free verse of broken love portrayed with the breaking glass...just great! :) ;) Even that 'odd' stanza with four lines works in the whole broken motif...especially with its complete image of the glass....love it! :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks, it?s really all I could interpret from the given picture! I?m glad you enjoyed reading my version! You are so complimentary.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I like your comparison of a broken relationship to a glass full of (alcoholic) spirits. That's a good analogy whether the spirits are warm or cold. Glasses break easily. So do relationships.
This is a good poem, Trisha. I can also see where it is coming from. I am thinking good thoughts of you today.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019

Thank you for your compliments and caring, Debbie. I enjoy your positive friendship
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. with a great metaphor and skilled language it is a joy to read. superbly rendered, Trisha................meeshu

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019

My goodness, I?m honored by your great review,. Thank you so much, meeshu
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Raul1

Good

This couple sure did have a handful. They have fought each other all throughout the day. It sounds like they don't get along well. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks for your review Raul, it?s appreciated
Hugs, Trish

reply by Raul1 on 20-Jan-2019

You're welcome

Comment from Graybærd

Excellent

The progression in this poem moves along quite well and I enjoyed the use of symbolism (the broken glass resembling a flock of birds). This marks my second freestyle poem I have read and I must say I was NOT disappointed.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Hi, I?m glad you were not disappointed! Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha