A Consequential Condiment
A poem.72 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
Quatrain ABAB. The alluring nature within the lines makes this poem a read in serenity. Very good rhyming with "mood" and "interlude." I especially liked the fourth stanza. Minimal use of punctuation. Eight syllable lines. Great flow. Enjoyed!
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Quatrain ABAB. The alluring nature within the lines makes this poem a read in serenity. Very good rhyming with "mood" and "interlude." I especially liked the fourth stanza. Minimal use of punctuation. Eight syllable lines. Great flow. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I love your poem as I love your writing. I would like to ask the question because it tripped me up so much when trying to digest this one - how do you make a condiment significant? Lol? It is great word flow however and I really enjoyed these rhymes they make me circle my brain at times. This one especially on that line trying to figure out how to incorporate it. But it was a pleasure to read! Thank you and Cheers, Fonda
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I love your poem as I love your writing. I would like to ask the question because it tripped me up so much when trying to digest this one - how do you make a condiment significant? Lol? It is great word flow however and I really enjoyed these rhymes they make me circle my brain at times. This one especially on that line trying to figure out how to incorporate it. But it was a pleasure to read! Thank you and Cheers, Fonda
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
