A Consequential Condiment
A poem.72 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I had to read it twice to fully digest your very clever words. Beautifully written. It sang to me. Best wishes. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I had to read it twice to fully digest your very clever words. Beautifully written. It sang to me. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this rhyming poem with us. I enjoyed reading. This poem flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I am guessing this is a poem of your favorite things.
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Thank you for sharing this rhyming poem with us. I enjoyed reading. This poem flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I am guessing this is a poem of your favorite things.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Pantygynt
As an exercise in superfluous redundancy, this is a brilliantly poetic poem. Iambic tetrameter quatrains in common metre - one of your most liked favourites I believe when it comes to rhythmic metre. Sorry I could not resist the temptation to have a go at it myself, albeit in prose.
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As an exercise in superfluous redundancy, this is a brilliantly poetic poem. Iambic tetrameter quatrains in common metre - one of your most liked favourites I believe when it comes to rhythmic metre. Sorry I could not resist the temptation to have a go at it myself, albeit in prose.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
Comment from Denise J Tidwell
I'm not sure how I feel about this one . I'm not sure but I think there should less lines l could be wrong Please explain!! Another thing help me with my counter I mine is off
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I'm not sure how I feel about this one . I'm not sure but I think there should less lines l could be wrong Please explain!! Another thing help me with my counter I mine is off
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
I love the upbeat tone of this poem, Tom. Starting with the title which to me indicates a little spice added, not the main dish, but just the thing to add the exquisite interlude to go with the solitude.
Superb metre and rhyme and an easy read.
Gloria
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I love the upbeat tone of this poem, Tom. Starting with the title which to me indicates a little spice added, not the main dish, but just the thing to add the exquisite interlude to go with the solitude.
Superb metre and rhyme and an easy read.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
Your eloquent and well-written verse flows smoothly through the stanzas and ends in a very strong reflective phrase. Good job on penning this verse .
All the best,
Melissa
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Your eloquent and well-written verse flows smoothly through the stanzas and ends in a very strong reflective phrase. Good job on penning this verse .
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from prettybluebirds
A well-written and inspirational poem. It has a tendency to make the reader stop and think about things. Well, this reader anyway. LOL. I enjoyed every word and look forward to reading more of your writing. Nicely done.
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A well-written and inspirational poem. It has a tendency to make the reader stop and think about things. Well, this reader anyway. LOL. I enjoyed every word and look forward to reading more of your writing. Nicely done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Wabigoon
Tom--
I really like this. I think, in places, there are words that you just stick in there to fill out the rhyme scheme which, to me, is unnecessary, but that's me. I like that you have concentrated on describing a feeling and a relationship to the "muse," to poetry and where that takes you.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
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Tom--
I really like this. I think, in places, there are words that you just stick in there to fill out the rhyme scheme which, to me, is unnecessary, but that's me. I like that you have concentrated on describing a feeling and a relationship to the "muse," to poetry and where that takes you.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Now only to live and live freely and meaningfully, feeling for perfect life as if began, everything is in solitude; well said, well done. Write inspire change for 1234 Years--- DR ALCREATOR
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Now only to live and live freely and meaningfully, feeling for perfect life as if began, everything is in solitude; well said, well done. Write inspire change for 1234 Years--- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
Comment from Teresa Alford
You just scored another poem of good standing. Keep it up. I enjoy your poetry. I am not a poet so I admire the skills of those who are. Write On! TA ";~)
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You just scored another poem of good standing. Keep it up. I enjoy your poetry. I am not a poet so I admire the skills of those who are. Write On! TA ";~)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
