A Consequential Condiment
A poem.72 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have been hitting them pretty hard lately, Everett. Is everything okay? That last stanza worries me.
I know when it becomes my time,
I'll try to squeeze out one more rhyme.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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You have been hitting them pretty hard lately, Everett. Is everything okay? That last stanza worries me.
I know when it becomes my time,
I'll try to squeeze out one more rhyme.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Love your couplet Paul. Great review. easy
Comment from Boogienights
What a wonderfully upbeat poem, full of hope and optimistic viewpoints. It's so well written and enjoyable to read, it put me in a good mood. Thanks for sharing. :)
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What a wonderfully upbeat poem, full of hope and optimistic viewpoints. It's so well written and enjoyable to read, it put me in a good mood. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from jake cosmos aller
A nicely penned an optimistic poem about finding one's inner light and finding peace, love, and contentment after a lifelong struggle with the dark demons of one's mind.
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A nicely penned an optimistic poem about finding one's inner light and finding peace, love, and contentment after a lifelong struggle with the dark demons of one's mind.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem, ee. I really liked the
meter and the rhymes. Both added to the enjoyment of
your well thought out poem. I believed there was more here
than a testament on how your muse helped you. I believed
there's a hidden agenda included such as a medical issue
that was resolved like cataracts.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your poem, ee. I really liked the
meter and the rhymes. Both added to the enjoyment of
your well thought out poem. I believed there was more here
than a testament on how your muse helped you. I believed
there's a hidden agenda included such as a medical issue
that was resolved like cataracts.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from bob cullen
I'd suggest your poetry, along with your sight should be rated near PERFECT. In the eyes of this writer you rate near the very best on this site. I read your work in the hope I may improve. And as that old English Marist Brother once said, Cullen there's a lot of room for improvement.
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I'd suggest your poetry, along with your sight should be rated near PERFECT. In the eyes of this writer you rate near the very best on this site. I read your work in the hope I may improve. And as that old English Marist Brother once said, Cullen there's a lot of room for improvement.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Just wonderful.
I loved this stanza:
I thank the teaching of the muse
who then, in gentle quietude,
committed to me rules to use
applied and tried in solitude.
You write with intensity. Thank you.
D
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Just wonderful.
I loved this stanza:
I thank the teaching of the muse
who then, in gentle quietude,
committed to me rules to use
applied and tried in solitude.
You write with intensity. Thank you.
D
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Ulla
You do have a way with words, don't you? I loved this poem which again says so many things with very well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this with us. Ulla:))?
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You do have a way with words, don't you? I loved this poem which again says so many things with very well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this with us. Ulla:))?
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was beautifully written. The rhyming well done. Your poem flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I loved the upbeat tone of your poem. Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It was beautifully written. The rhyming well done. Your poem flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I loved the upbeat tone of your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
Your eloquent language flows beautifully throughout this delightful poem. I love alliteration and you are the master of this poetic device.
Throughly enjoyed reading.
Blessings
Janet
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Your eloquent language flows beautifully throughout this delightful poem. I love alliteration and you are the master of this poetic device.
Throughly enjoyed reading.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A serene sentiment is worth keeping in our memory for recollection on those days when we find no peace. Those moments that we treasure in quiet solitude are often magical moments in time, I enjoyed the journey here Tom, love Dolly x
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A serene sentiment is worth keeping in our memory for recollection on those days when we find no peace. Those moments that we treasure in quiet solitude are often magical moments in time, I enjoyed the journey here Tom, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
