Until We Meet Again
Beautiful Friend...67 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
A beautiful and well crafted 5-7-5 formatted poem about your loss. Very touching sentiment. A lovely composition. All the best in the contest. It should do well.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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A beautiful and well crafted 5-7-5 formatted poem about your loss. Very touching sentiment. A lovely composition. All the best in the contest. It should do well.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much Treischel
Comment from Earl Corp
I most of us havve received the uneasy ring that brings pain. I'm sorry for your loss. You picked an awesome picture to accompany the poem. Good luck in the contest. Very nice job.
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I most of us havve received the uneasy ring that brings pain. I'm sorry for your loss. You picked an awesome picture to accompany the poem. Good luck in the contest. Very nice job.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I can't imagine that it doesn't give 'cause to answer the phone... You know... on the other side of the digital connection something is wrong... So, with that prologue, I?ll start my story ? if you?re still with me.
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Go for it!!!
Comment from Wabigoon
Art--
I would like this better without the picture. That is mostly my response -- the picture,for me, dominates the poem, skews the meaning a particular way. Ah, but that's me. I like the poem and...and yes, he or she was your "partner in crime." Something angled more that way.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Art--
I would like this better without the picture. That is mostly my response -- the picture,for me, dominates the poem, skews the meaning a particular way. Ah, but that's me. I like the poem and...and yes, he or she was your "partner in crime." Something angled more that way.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thanks kiddo... and So, with that prologue, I?ll start my story ? if you?re still with me.
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Yes, I think I am still with you. Continue
Jeff
Comment from Sugarray77
May I tell you how sorry I am for the loss of your friend! This is a lovely tribute to them. Your presentation of this 5-7-5 for the contest is perfect and subtitle. Just right.
Melissa
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May I tell you how sorry I am for the loss of your friend! This is a lovely tribute to them. Your presentation of this 5-7-5 for the contest is perfect and subtitle. Just right.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much Sugarray... I've had this call too many times in my life over the course of time... yours, diana
Comment from Heather Knight
I'm so sorry for your loss. It's difficult to lose a friend.
As you say, even though it hurts, your friend lives on in your heart.
Thanks for sharing this tribute and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I'm so sorry for your loss. It's difficult to lose a friend.
As you say, even though it hurts, your friend lives on in your heart.
Thanks for sharing this tribute and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Hell Maria... It truly is life's momentary slap in the face... thanks so much for reading yours, diana
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Great short poem! I like how it rhymes and how much impact you created with simple words. It clearly shows immense pain of your loss. One of my biggest fears...getting that call.
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Great short poem! I like how it rhymes and how much impact you created with simple words. It clearly shows immense pain of your loss. One of my biggest fears...getting that call.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hi Carola... thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
Comment from kiwijenny
I am so sorry . It isnt easy to receive that call. I am so sorry. Memories and heartfelt love will be yours. My cousin just died this past September and she was my age. That's what is hard . It's out of time ...stolen.
God bless you
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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I am so sorry . It isnt easy to receive that call. I am so sorry. Memories and heartfelt love will be yours. My cousin just died this past September and she was my age. That's what is hard . It's out of time ...stolen.
God bless you
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Kiwi... it is never a call you want to receive... I've had several over the course of my life and it never gets easier... thanks kiwi... yours, diana
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Hugs. I?m praying for you
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ARTASYLUM: I like tour poem here in that it is brief, and to the point. In just three lines and fourteen words you bring your interesting story to the light. This poem is unique. Thank you for sharing this posting. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ARTASYLUM: I like tour poem here in that it is brief, and to the point. In just three lines and fourteen words you bring your interesting story to the light. This poem is unique. Thank you for sharing this posting. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hey Kiddo... thanks as always for your wonderful and sage review. yours, diana
Comment from Raul1
I see where you are going with this. The poem resembles a part of self healing. We all hurt somehow. This is why talking to people about their happy times and advice helps. Thanks for sharing!
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I see where you are going with this. The poem resembles a part of self healing. We all hurt somehow. This is why talking to people about their happy times and advice helps. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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thanks for your review and your sage thoughts and observations... yours diana
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You're welcome
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Oh this is as heart breaking and it is full of love. I read it twice to understand your message. The art work speaks not of death and grief but life, new, glorious and in the Spirit's realm.
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Oh this is as heart breaking and it is full of love. I read it twice to understand your message. The art work speaks not of death and grief but life, new, glorious and in the Spirit's realm.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Hey Donna... It never gets easier does it... yours, diana
