Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is a great one-line poem and good advice for anyone at any time. Like everyone, I've been guilty of wasting precious time on trivial matters, and it's good to be reminded not to take my life for granted.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 11-Jan-2019

You're welcome, Patricia.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

My sentiments as well--where did 2018 go? Thank you for reminding us to live every day to its fullest. I enjoyed your wonderfully apt picture too. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019

Thank you for the nice review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

That is such a good message. That is exactly how we have to live our lives and go to bed contented at night. Good luck with this positive "one-line" poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Amen to that, Patricia! It seems that the older we get, the faster times flies by. We have to make every day and every minute count.

Best wishes for the contest. This is an excellent one line poem.

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Sounds good but if I thought it were my last, I might do something wild like go parachuting or go to some far place in the world that I never saw. Lol. Well done one-liner, Patricia!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Isn't that the truth and it seems to go faster and faster each year. Your poem is very well-written, your great word choice allows you to get your point across nicely using very few words, great job as always.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thank you for the most lovely review/

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written one-line poem about the time that flies past so quickly when we see another year begins. I agree we have to live each day as if it is our very last day.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Your one-liner poem is filled with a great life lesson. It's amazing to know that life lessons can come to us in such few words, but those few words have a major impact. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your one-line poem gives great advice. It sounds so simple that I think
sometimes people just overlook the wisdom conveyed in such a statement.
Anytime we're not making best use of our day, we're forgetting it could
be our last.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for your review.
It is so simple to gain wisdom, we just have to look to the little things in life.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Hi Patricia. Yes Indeed, each year seems to go by faster and faster. You wrote a fine one line poem here and even managed to insert some rhyme Well done! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019

Thanks for your kind review.