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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Bill,

This animated illustration is so appropriate for your verse. Babies and kittens are both very cuddly and do require our constant attention.

After 'kittens,' you have a semi-colon mark. I think it should be a colon.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
    I was prepared to disagree, having normally used the colon when preceding a list suggested by the initial statement. Looking into it further, I see your point.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. LOL. Both babies and kittens can be quite demanding--which one are you referring to? Image is adorable. Your poem is fun and sweet. Nice job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. It depends on the personality of the baby or the kitten. Some kids/cats are more demanding than others. Cute poem for the adorable graphic picture, Bill!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Cats !!
Comment from nomi338
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True dat. If you ignore a baby, the most he will probably just cry for a while. A cat on the other hand will do bad things to you and your property. I seriously advise against ignoring a cat that does not wish to be ignored. That is one of the main reasons I will never own a cat or even allow one to enter my house.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Before he had its claws removed, my son?s cat hollowed out his over-stuffed sofa. He didn?t know it until he moved the couch and all the stuffing was there.
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very sweet, cute and true 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good and true words with an adorable picture that has moving features of the Baby and kitten. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
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It's been my experience that they both demand our attention. Interesting topic for a poem. Very cool graphic you chose to accompany the poem. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    My son?s cat has forced me to become more familiar with cats and their position in the family.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A fun little 5-7-5 with SO MUCH TRUTH....however, for those of us with a lively kitten (and no little ones anymore), we might also say the kitten is pretty damn demanding at times - LOL! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    All the cats I?ve seen are loners with groupies.
Comment from judiverse
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Aw, what a winning picture. Both subjects deserve attention. I'd say they could both be equally demanding. Maybe the kitten is working a bit harder for it. Interesting idea, and that picture can't be beat. Can't refuse either a baby or a kitten. judi

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Judi.
Comment from Miss Sherry
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So sweet and I love the motion thing. Haven't had babies in a long time, but have demanding cats. This is just too cute and makes my morning! You always have something great to share.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thank you, OP
reply by Miss Sherry on 05-Jan-2019
    Any time!
Comment from Teresa Alford
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Cute, cute, cute! Bill Schott doesn't disappoint! I wrote a story yesterday morning that I will likely pot over the weekend, so keep your eye out for it. BTW, loved the graphic too. T

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
    Thanks, TA