Eyes on You
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Big Heist"Tommy tries to rescue their family.
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well...Tommy, Vinnie and Gary are ready to do their first Job. Will it be all they hope it will be? Who is right? The detectives or the crooks. The Homeowners say they are in financial trouble. Rachel thinks it is an insurance scam. Time will tell. Well done. Nancy:)
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Well...Tommy, Vinnie and Gary are ready to do their first Job. Will it be all they hope it will be? Who is right? The detectives or the crooks. The Homeowners say they are in financial trouble. Rachel thinks it is an insurance scam. Time will tell. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It seems that Rachel's gut is wrong for once which is good news for the crooks. At least for a little while.
Thank you again for your great review, all your help, support and friendship. It means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Rob Caudle
Mistydawn, this was a pleasure to read. Your dialoge was well penned and moved the story at a pefect pace. LOve your characters on both sides of the law. the little details you sprinkle throughou your prose bring the whole story to life.
Rob
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Mistydawn, this was a pleasure to read. Your dialoge was well penned and moved the story at a pefect pace. LOve your characters on both sides of the law. the little details you sprinkle throughou your prose bring the whole story to life.
Rob
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my chapter, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and that the plot and characters seem realistic to you.
Thank you again for your continious support, and all your encouraging words, take care.
Comment from country ranch writer
He is out of his league here as to what's going on he needs to stop and think of a more logical reason for these robberies and go from there.
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He is out of his league here as to what's going on he needs to stop and think of a more logical reason for these robberies and go from there.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read my chapter. Tommy is madly in love with Jen and is willing to do what ever it takes to save her life.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, all your help, support and friendship, take care.
Comment from AdaJulie
This is so perfectly put together. I am very impressed and so grateful i got to read this. You are talented and may you bless many with your talent. Great job.
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This is so perfectly put together. I am very impressed and so grateful i got to read this. You are talented and may you bless many with your talent. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your marvelous review, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Reading encougaing reviews like yours makes it all worth while.
Thank you again for such a fantastic review, take care.
Comment from royowen
Tommy has some very profitable jobs planned to succeed in paying for Jen's operation, and has worked out perhaps, they might be foolproof. Rachel works out that there are similarities with the robberies as they ivestigate the robbery of a couple planning to adopt a child. Makes a bet with Jerry sgphes right, good plot and characters, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Some of our belonging(s) was,(were?) missing.
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Tommy has some very profitable jobs planned to succeed in paying for Jen's operation, and has worked out perhaps, they might be foolproof. Rachel works out that there are similarities with the robberies as they ivestigate the robbery of a couple planning to adopt a child. Makes a bet with Jerry sgphes right, good plot and characters, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Some of our belonging(s) was,(were?) missing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review and for catching my typo. Loving Jen as much as he does, Tommy will do everything he can to come up with the money they need. Will he be sucessful or will he get caught? Only time will tell.
Thank you again for your kind review and for all your help, support and your friendship. It means a lot to me, take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, so far our 'villains' are safe and Rachel is way off course. I can see her reasoning, and seeing she already knows of another robbed family is short of money, it seems the most likely answer.This is going along nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing how you go now. Well done. :) Sandra xxx
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Well, so far our 'villains' are safe and Rachel is way off course. I can see her reasoning, and seeing she already knows of another robbed family is short of money, it seems the most likely answer.This is going along nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing how you go now. Well done. :) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you again for your wonderful review, I'm glad you enjoyed the continuance. Tommy and his crew is safe from the police, but how is he going to explain his presents to the visitor?
Thank you again for your encouraging review, your support, friendship, take care.
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Now that's what I'm waiting for you to tell me! I hope he has a good excuse ready! :)) xx
