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Comment from meeshu
that word list is pretty whacky but you have created some great images anyway, and your writing is clever and descriptive. good luck in the contest..
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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that word list is pretty whacky but you have created some great images anyway, and your writing is clever and descriptive. good luck in the contest..
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you this was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Treischel
This was delightful! It was also insightful. On its behalf, I had a good belly laugh with each line of coupled rhyme. And the master topper that you made, was considering an outhouse an upgrade. HaH!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This was delightful! It was also insightful. On its behalf, I had a good belly laugh with each line of coupled rhyme. And the master topper that you made, was considering an outhouse an upgrade. HaH!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and great use of the prescirbed words that tell a story of something we all can relate to very well. When we have to go it must happen quick sometimes.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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A very well-written poem and great use of the prescirbed words that tell a story of something we all can relate to very well. When we have to go it must happen quick sometimes.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your kind words. I appreciate you reaing and reviewing my piece.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, When You Gotta Go, You Gotta Go, uses all the required words and creates this rustic situation where an outhouse becomes the preferred place to drop a deuce.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This poem, When You Gotta Go, You Gotta Go, uses all the required words and creates this rustic situation where an outhouse becomes the preferred place to drop a deuce.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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It beats a cathole for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! This poem is so creatively-written, with some dry humor in the mix.
Some will read this and say, "Did people really used to live this way?!"
Until I was in my mid-teens, we had an outdoor toilet and got our water
from a dug-well out back or a spring. We were typical.
I like this!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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WOW! This poem is so creatively-written, with some dry humor in the mix.
Some will read this and say, "Did people really used to live this way?!"
Until I was in my mid-teens, we had an outdoor toilet and got our water
from a dug-well out back or a spring. We were typical.
I like this!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Janice for your kind words. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the required words for this contest entry. I enjoyed reading your fun poem. I like the way you wrote the required words in bold type. Good job on the rhymes. Your story was fun to read and true. "real poets" ???? You did a good job. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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You did a good job with the required words for this contest entry. I enjoyed reading your fun poem. I like the way you wrote the required words in bold type. Good job on the rhymes. Your story was fun to read and true. "real poets" ???? You did a good job. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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I don't consider myself a real poet. I appreciate you reading and reviwing my work.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is an excellent poem. It is well written well presented and the rhyme and flow are smooth. The words are well chosen and make for a humorous read, and the artwork adds a nice finishing touch.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This is an excellent poem. It is well written well presented and the rhyme and flow are smooth. The words are well chosen and make for a humorous read, and the artwork adds a nice finishing touch.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words Sarah. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Scott Cooper
Really clever word play and love the humor you laced into the piece. I feel like it is has a great flow and reads as such. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Really clever word play and love the humor you laced into the piece. I feel like it is has a great flow and reads as such. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Michele Harber
Difficult or not (and it certainly would have been for me!), I think you did an excellent job fitting these words into a sensible, credible and humorous story. Your rhymes work well and, while there is a problem with meter and flow, I fully understand that having to fit all those words in was definitely a hindrance. Overall, I think you handled this very well, and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Difficult or not (and it certainly would have been for me!), I think you did an excellent job fitting these words into a sensible, credible and humorous story. Your rhymes work well and, while there is a problem with meter and flow, I fully understand that having to fit all those words in was definitely a hindrance. Overall, I think you handled this very well, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
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It's my pleasure, and you certainly gave me a good chuckle.
Comment from Teresa Alford
It sems like it would be difficult to get all those words in a poem. You did good job I'm awfully glad my bathroom isn't like the one pictured. Write On!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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It sems like it would be difficult to get all those words in a poem. You did good job I'm awfully glad my bathroom isn't like the one pictured. Write On!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your kind words. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
