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Comment from evilynne
This is so witty and you did use all the words. What else could one possibly say except to wish you the best of luck in the contest! Evi
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This is so witty and you did use all the words. What else could one possibly say except to wish you the best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LynSys
You certainly incorporated all of those words to put a humorous spin on a private matter.
Good flow of words and....thank for the visual ;o)
Good luck in the contest!
Lynda
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You certainly incorporated all of those words to put a humorous spin on a private matter.
Good flow of words and....thank for the visual ;o)
Good luck in the contest!
Lynda
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much Lynda. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
This was a fun poem to read today. I have memories of using the outhouse on my Aunt's farm in my younger days. I still think a creature will jump up to bite me from the depths below. And the smell, yuck! I don't remember any half moon windows though.
I think you did a fine job of putting those words to work in your poem. i'd likely draw a big ol' blank. Your poem is entrrtaining and conjures up old memories. In Heritage Park here in Calgary,mthey have a two story outhouse with hree or four up top and that many down below. They must have offset them so the folks on bottom don't get showered on.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Joy xx
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Hello Mystery Poet,
This was a fun poem to read today. I have memories of using the outhouse on my Aunt's farm in my younger days. I still think a creature will jump up to bite me from the depths below. And the smell, yuck! I don't remember any half moon windows though.
I think you did a fine job of putting those words to work in your poem. i'd likely draw a big ol' blank. Your poem is entrrtaining and conjures up old memories. In Heritage Park here in Calgary,mthey have a two story outhouse with hree or four up top and that many down below. They must have offset them so the folks on bottom don't get showered on.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Joy for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written story that uses the words in a witty manner that gives images of the horrors of heeding natures call in nature. Sometimes there are positives about and outhouse.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a well written story that uses the words in a witty manner that gives images of the horrors of heeding natures call in nature. Sometimes there are positives about and outhouse.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
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My pleasure.
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Comment from Marc Grimaldi
I love this particular contest, where you have to use the assigned words. And your poem was definitely funny. Even the way it reads is comical. Well done, keep up the good writing!
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I love this particular contest, where you have to use the assigned words. And your poem was definitely funny. Even the way it reads is comical. Well done, keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Miss Sherry
You ARE a real poet. This is delightful and the artwork resembles the outhouse on my grandma's farm that I remember - having to take my 4 year-old brother past the onery geese.
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You ARE a real poet. This is delightful and the artwork resembles the outhouse on my grandma's farm that I remember - having to take my 4 year-old brother past the onery geese.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Ooh geese suck. Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Thank you back!
Comment from mermaids
I am delighted to read a poem about an outhouse, they have a place in history. You have a smooth poetic flow and a use of words that creates a clear scene. I think you did an excellent job with the contest words.
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I am delighted to read a poem about an outhouse, they have a place in history. You have a smooth poetic flow and a use of words that creates a clear scene. I think you did an excellent job with the contest words.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks mermaids it was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Maudaline Montes
Very nice use of the words in this poem. Really good pattern of rhymes too. The picture really helps put the image inside your head. Best of luck in the contest!!! :)
-Maudaline Montes
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Very nice use of the words in this poem. Really good pattern of rhymes too. The picture really helps put the image inside your head. Best of luck in the contest!!! :)
-Maudaline Montes
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Heather Knight
It can't have been easy to use all these words. Anyway, I think you've done a great job. Your poem is extremely funny.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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It can't have been easy to use all these words. Anyway, I think you've done a great job. Your poem is extremely funny.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Maria it was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Artasylum
I love this and the image is perfect... Loves the way you brought together the words and made a very fun and funny read... the crescent moon is no longer welcome in your world. yours diana
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I love this and the image is perfect... Loves the way you brought together the words and made a very fun and funny read... the crescent moon is no longer welcome in your world. yours diana
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks Diana it was a fun write. I only write poetry I can have fun with. Thank you for your kind words.
