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Fabric of Love

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Comment from mermaids
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This is such a creative poem comparing love to fabric textures. Love the line about spandex. Your opening verse draws the reader into your poem which is unique and makes the reader think.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Glad you liked my metaphors and thought it creative. Thanks

    Joan
Comment from nomi338
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And thus you have described not only the fabric of love, but you have managed to describe quite succinctly, the very fabric of life. All that you wrote, perfectly sums up what love and life are all about, metaphorically speaking.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Glad you thought this. Thanks for taking the time to read and review
    Joan
reply by nomi338 on 21-Sep-2021
    It was my pleasure.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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This is just great poetry! You have done a wonderful job in picking fabric for each part. I am thrilled to have read this - and it has poked my muse.
Very nice writing!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks. I am glad Inspired you
    Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Thanks for sharing
the idea you found
and the poem, Joan.
-You did a good job with it.
-I liked the variety of
fabrics you chose and
the imagery to go with them.
-My favorite verse is the
first one because you show
love as "smooth and soft,"
and cotton is a good comparison.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Jan. It seems everyone has their favorite metaphors
    Joan
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Sep-2021
    You are welcome, Joan. There were good ones to pick from.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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And you've used the different fabrics well through these verses Joan.I particularly liked the 'forgiving as spandex' and long lasting as polyester. We all found that out. What works when you're young needs little alterations with age. Well done Joan. Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I am honored by the six-star rating. Those seem to be the favorite lines of most.
    Joan
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem about the fabric of love. You did a great response to the internet prompt using great metaphors. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Teri, for your nice review and high rating. Both are much appreciated.
    Joan
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
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Very well written. You accomplished the goal. This made me smile. You can't destroy polyester unless you set it on fire. Fun poem. I like the phrase - as bumpy as corduroy.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much for reading and commenting of my poem.
    dp
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Fabric of Love", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks for your continued support and encouragement, Duchess.
    Joan
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Sep-2021

    Joan, as always you're very welcome,
    the Duchess
Comment from L. Kalere
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What a clever poem, seeped in metaphors and similes, all very relatable. Lot's of fun to read...favorite line: Love as forgiving as spandex. I loved it.
Linda

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thanks, Linda, for your kind comments and generous rating.
    Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Fabric of Love
by dragonpoet

I like the fabric metaphors...so cool.

This one is my favorite... LoL..."As bumpy as corduroy.". LoL

Well done, Joan!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Gypsy.
    Joan