Comment from Kelly Grim

Excellent

What a cute story! This made me smile at the end right along with the girl with the long blonde curls. Had a sweet little twist I wasn't expecting! Nicely done!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Loved this review zanya

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

hahahahaha!

Dear Mystery Writer,

My, my, our lover-boy seems awfully fickle. Wonder if he still has his heart set on meeting up with his original girl? Or if he'll just choose the gal with the hair he loves best? haha! Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Enjoyed reading this zanya

Comment from Sarah_Goldwell

Excellent

This is an excellent piece of work, it is well written humorous and clever and a great contest entry. Not only have you have managed to get a beginning middle and end out of 100 words, you also managed a backstory and a twist. Impressive work!

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

And impressive review with specifics zanya