Smuckatelly Rides Again
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Comment from lyenochka
Boy, those trainees and just training in general is brutal. Humorous name and hope he survived - hope they all made it through training!
" junior drill.One day" (space needed after the period.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Boy, those trainees and just training in general is brutal. Humorous name and hope he survived - hope they all made it through training!
" junior drill.One day" (space needed after the period.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from meeshu
I enjoy reading your stories of Basic Training hijinks. the "push Georgia away" line, I assume is about push-ups. "push Georgia down to hell" might have more punch? just spitballin' great write Earl.........meeshu
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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I enjoy reading your stories of Basic Training hijinks. the "push Georgia away" line, I assume is about push-ups. "push Georgia down to hell" might have more punch? just spitballin' great write Earl.........meeshu
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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To Hell would have put me over 100 words. Thanks for your kind words and taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sugarray77
Earl, I love your military stories and how vividly you write about them. Good job on this short one for the 100 Flash prompt. Good luck and I hope you and Smuckatelly win.
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Earl, I love your military stories and how vividly you write about them. Good job on this short one for the 100 Flash prompt. Good luck and I hope you and Smuckatelly win.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks Melissa, theyre so vivid because I was so young when I went they traumatized me LOL. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the 100 word flash fiction contest. This was right on for the word count and an interesting choice of topic. I am sure poor Smuckatelly learned his lesson rather well. Enjoyable to read, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Good luck in the 100 word flash fiction contest. This was right on for the word count and an interesting choice of topic. I am sure poor Smuckatelly learned his lesson rather well. Enjoyable to read, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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most welcome
Comment from country ranch writer
That's what he gets for continually doing pranks and he learned his lesson the hard way! He is just lucky someone spoke up!
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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That's what he gets for continually doing pranks and he learned his lesson the hard way! He is just lucky someone spoke up!
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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He was very lucky. Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from jenintorre
Well you certainly taught Smuckatelly a lesson. A nice little flash fiction with a good ending. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Well you certainly taught Smuckatelly a lesson. A nice little flash fiction with a good ending. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
