Advice from Oz
This is a quatern about one of my favorite movies.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This quatern, Advice from Oz, has the proper formatting and calls on the image of Dorothy to represent the sanctuary of Home Sweet Home; the place you want to be. Let's play Twister.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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This quatern, Advice from Oz, has the proper formatting and calls on the image of Dorothy to represent the sanctuary of Home Sweet Home; the place you want to be. Let's play Twister.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Hi, Bill Schott,
Thank you for the kind comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem and that you took the time to read it.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author! I have to say, I was highly entertained by this poem. The reason for the four is that I want you to take a look at the second line in the last stanza, (especially since this is a contest entry). The meter is a bit off, and the reference is unclear on the first read. You may want to try something along the lines of, "I don't cook, so quit your bitchin'." I love this poem though, it's lots of fun. I'm always really impressed with people who can write these things as I have yet to have any success with one myself. Good Luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hello Author! I have to say, I was highly entertained by this poem. The reason for the four is that I want you to take a look at the second line in the last stanza, (especially since this is a contest entry). The meter is a bit off, and the reference is unclear on the first read. You may want to try something along the lines of, "I don't cook, so quit your bitchin'." I love this poem though, it's lots of fun. I'm always really impressed with people who can write these things as I have yet to have any success with one myself. Good Luck!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, susand3022, for your feedback. I'll look into that line.
Comment from Teresa Alford
I really like your poem. It flows well and you did a good job of blending in the required repeating phase. Perfect picture to go with the poem. Great job. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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I really like your poem. It flows well and you did a good job of blending in the required repeating phase. Perfect picture to go with the poem. Great job. Keep writing!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Hello, Teresa Alford,
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the feedback and the encouragement.
