Any Age, Yes, Yes, Yes!
Birds do it, Bees, AND old goats too3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
'Any Age, yes, yes, yes' - so true and a perfect title for this perfect 5-7-5, describing real life love no matter how young or how old.
I love everything about your poem, from presentation to font size, style and color to your most humorous expression (the poem itself) of love at any age.
I am always attracted by your punctuation, line placement, and what words you choose to stand out.
Awesome!
Gale
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'Any Age, yes, yes, yes' - so true and a perfect title for this perfect 5-7-5, describing real life love no matter how young or how old.
I love everything about your poem, from presentation to font size, style and color to your most humorous expression (the poem itself) of love at any age.
I am always attracted by your punctuation, line placement, and what words you choose to stand out.
Awesome!
Gale
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm not usually impressed with 5-7-5 poetry, but i like yours. The graphic you chose to accompany the poem is very cool. Your poem makes sense and it invokes emotions within the reader. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
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I'm not usually impressed with 5-7-5 poetry, but i like yours. The graphic you chose to accompany the poem is very cool. Your poem makes sense and it invokes emotions within the reader. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
Comment from Jason A. Kilgore
This is great. It isn't sappy, and it paints a picture without needing to say too much. Why else would an old man do a jig? And old guys don't care if folks laugh at them. I also love how this illustrates that falling in love can happen at any age. Too often old er generations are typecast as unable to have new love affairs and living in their past. Great work!
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This is great. It isn't sappy, and it paints a picture without needing to say too much. Why else would an old man do a jig? And old guys don't care if folks laugh at them. I also love how this illustrates that falling in love can happen at any age. Too often old er generations are typecast as unable to have new love affairs and living in their past. Great work!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
