Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

How adorable!! This snow theme is cute. I enjoyed reading your entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem. The presentation and the theme were well-written and romantic. Good job on this short poem and good luck.

All the best.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet
I was just reading the entries for this 'love ' themed contest' .
Your poem is sweet and I love your pic .

I'm reviewing also cause you made a typo .. Check it out

All the best in the competition!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks I will take another look.

reply by tempeste on 02-Jan-2019

I'm so sorry.
I have learnt a new English word rink..

I thought you wanted to write ice ring ..

Sorry for the bother ..

All the best in the competition .

Ciao!

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019

No problem, thanks for the read.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The imagery is good with
"snow sprinkled."
-You set the scene well,
and show how this
special relationship began.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you for the read and your comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Jan-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Great poem and picture. I think many know when they see a person that they are special. Good luck in the contest. Your short poem says alot . Good word flow.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks much for the read and taking time to review.