Tanka(grandson paints)
A Tanka poem36 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Pam, I went back and looked...how did I miss all of these poems...where was I???...well!!! the grandapple doesn't fall far from the grandtree....you both did a beautiful job on this artwork...and love your poem...great teamwork sweet girl...very nicely written...love you lots...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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HI Pam, I went back and looked...how did I miss all of these poems...where was I???...well!!! the grandapple doesn't fall far from the grandtree....you both did a beautiful job on this artwork...and love your poem...great teamwork sweet girl...very nicely written...love you lots...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you Linda for your lovely review. Take care
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you take care as well...and your so welcome my sweet friend...love you...xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
You're words describe the painting well. You should be very proud of him. He is
a good artist. I like that both of you worked on it together.
Keep writing and painting.
Joan
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You're words describe the painting well. You should be very proud of him. He is
a good artist. I like that both of you worked on it together.
Keep writing and painting.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
Beautiful picture! Keep up the "duet" work with your grandson. Those kinds of memories will never fade. Beautiful tanka poem as well. Sadly, family affairs are getting rarer and rarer in our technologically advanced age. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Beautiful picture! Keep up the "duet" work with your grandson. Those kinds of memories will never fade. Beautiful tanka poem as well. Sadly, family affairs are getting rarer and rarer in our technologically advanced age. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you Marc for your wonderful review
Comment from Michele Harber
Oh how sweet! I love that you and your grandson collaborated on this, and the smile on your face as you write about it is obvious. I like the vibrant colors he uses, and the curve he gave to the hills. I enjoy that the road leads directly to the beautiful, bright sun (hope?), but that the barren tree adds a little melancholy touch just to even things out.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Oh how sweet! I love that you and your grandson collaborated on this, and the smile on your face as you write about it is obvious. I like the vibrant colors he uses, and the curve he gave to the hills. I enjoy that the road leads directly to the beautiful, bright sun (hope?), but that the barren tree adds a little melancholy touch just to even things out.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you Michele for another lovely review
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You?re very welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Grandson Paints, looks good and brings a new mind into the creative processes which develop sight into expression. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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This tanka, Grandson Paints, looks good and brings a new mind into the creative processes which develop sight into expression. Nice.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you Bill for your wonderful review
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I can tell you are proud of your grandson. My grandson is fourteen and a very talented artist. He paints portraits that are very realistic. My sister is a well-known artist. She does portraits for the Hall of Fame in Ohio. I guess this is where he gets it from.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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I can tell you are proud of your grandson. My grandson is fourteen and a very talented artist. He paints portraits that are very realistic. My sister is a well-known artist. She does portraits for the Hall of Fame in Ohio. I guess this is where he gets it from.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Hi Thomas. I am guessing the pro football hall of fame in Canton Ohio? Thank you for your wonderful review
Comment from godlucifer
memories can be uplifting especially when time is spent with someone. our past,present,or future is a time of well spent especially if its a family affair. your poem was very positive and inspirational. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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memories can be uplifting especially when time is spent with someone. our past,present,or future is a time of well spent especially if its a family affair. your poem was very positive and inspirational. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you godlucifer for your wonderful review
Comment from susand3022
Good afternoon Pam! Happy New Year!! Your grandson is painting with you now? That's so awesome, I love this Tanka. It's sweet and your center line makes a great turning point. Susan
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Good afternoon Pam! Happy New Year!! Your grandson is painting with you now? That's so awesome, I love this Tanka. It's sweet and your center line makes a great turning point. Susan
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thank you Susan for your wonderful review. I do not see him often. But he is a good kid.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very well constructed Tanka poem. I like the last line. It is wonderful that you paint with your grandson and what a lovely painting. Happy 2019. Love Jen. X
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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This is a very well constructed Tanka poem. I like the last line. It is wonderful that you paint with your grandson and what a lovely painting. Happy 2019. Love Jen. X
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jen for your lovely review. I may paint with the middle grandson and maybe even his girlfriend
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, how delightful! I'm so glad that you painted with your grandson. It's these kinds of precious memories that remain with the kids all there lives. Great team effort on creating a lovely painting!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Oh, how delightful! I'm so glad that you painted with your grandson. It's these kinds of precious memories that remain with the kids all there lives. Great team effort on creating a lovely painting!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thank you Helen for your wonderful review He is almost 16
