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The Journey Begins

Nothing better than your lover as your best friend

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu about a recent marriage, The Journey Begins, has a 5-7-5 format and reduces the feelings even more to the phrase 'traveling life together'. Nice.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from meeshu
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This is a very good piece, consistent theme, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. I wish you the best in the new contest..

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Teresa Alford
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So sweet. Love the poem and the pic. You did a great job and I like the way the pic works with the poem. I don't know that I got "Recently Married" out of it, but there is definitely a connection told in words and picture as the two are joined together and plan to face life's journey as they travel together. Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
    Thanks for the read and the comments. Maybe a title change.