Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sweet write with warm sentiments here and your poem brings forth much joy, I wish you luck with the contest, your words are precious with that artwork, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018

Thanks so much, Dolly.

All the best,

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-six-one, A Matched Set, has the syllables in the right place and finds that a full set of toes makes for the perfect footing. Agreed.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018

Thanks so much, Bill.

All the best,

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is precious!
-loved how you spaced out the words to your 1-6-1
-you could not have chosen a better illustration for your poem
-I thought your words were very clever :)
This is a great contest entry! I wish you the very best!
Gale

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thanks so much, Gale!!

Comment from Tirza Savellano

Excellent

Magnificent! This piece may be short, but it carries such passion within it. The image you have selected fits perfectly with your gentle words. Awesome job! Thank you for sharing and have a Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thanks so much, Tirza!!!

All the best,

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Oh such cute little baby feet! Definitely a matched set/pair.

I enjoyed your contest entry's 'lightness' of words. To be honest, I counted the toes in case it actually showed nine ... LOL

Your 'en'ding is very good ð???

Unfortunately, my iPad view saw the last line of your text as flush-left. Your intent may have not been the same.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thanks Mark. I had staggered the lines for effect. I appreciate your review.

All the best,

reply by Mark D. R. on 30-Dec-2018

Your holiday 'italic stagger' is A-OK, but my iPad look had your last line (word) flush left. I had assumed you wanted it aligned to the right side to agree with the indenting style used for your first two lines. Apologies if your intent was different.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the first thing every mom or dad of a new-born is to count the fingers and toes. If all ten is there the rest cannot be too bad and can be dealt with.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thanks very much, Sandra, for the lovely review.

Comment from AdaJulie

Excellent

Ten is a must! Very cute, fun read with the visual of the photo is rather thought-provoking. How many things of ten do we take for granted? Great won't!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thanks so much!

All the best,

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this very short poem is delightful. You have done a fine job with this, ten is always the best unless, you go to eleven. good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thank you very much, Meeshu.

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

This is a cute poem, and the picture suits it quite well. Cute little feet. Everyone wants to count ten toes and ten fingers when their baby is born. You said this well in such few syllables.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2018

Thank you very much, j m.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Good

This speaks about sets, when nine does not do, then ten will do, good information that may teach numbering or setting; I could not enjoy the read. Happy New Year - DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018

Thank you.