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Comment from RodG
I like how you personified Lady Liberty in this short-short and described HER reaction to the treatment she gets because of the President's new policy toward immigrants. Sadly, this story seems so plausible.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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I like how you personified Lady Liberty in this short-short and described HER reaction to the treatment she gets because of the President's new policy toward immigrants. Sadly, this story seems so plausible.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Seriously though, that advert no longer applies. Imagine the huddled masses suing America for false advertising? It is sad. Thanks for your thoughts on this. judester
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very creative and emotive write for the Reactions poetry prompt. The use of energetic drama to create the passionate part of this write is equally mirrored in the drama of casting a crown and sinking into the water. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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This is a very creative and emotive write for the Reactions poetry prompt. The use of energetic drama to create the passionate part of this write is equally mirrored in the drama of casting a crown and sinking into the water. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the review. It does sadly seem to be false advertising because these compassionate words, no longer apply. Cheers, judester
