Tanka(eye in sky)
A Tanka poem19 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written ephrastic poem. The monkeys seem to create a mountain pass that the sun is showing through that the girls are
watching.
Keep writing
Joan
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This is a well written ephrastic poem. The monkeys seem to create a mountain pass that the sun is showing through that the girls are
watching.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
Comment from jmshumate
A very abstract poem for an abstract painting. I see the two girls. I see the owl, but I also see two horses maybe even unicorns facing each other in the middle touching nose to nose butting heads. Each shows one eye on the side view here. The girl in the purple is picking her butt or itching it. Very interesting poem and fun to try and see in the abstract. Thank you for sharing this
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A very abstract poem for an abstract painting. I see the two girls. I see the owl, but I also see two horses maybe even unicorns facing each other in the middle touching nose to nose butting heads. Each shows one eye on the side view here. The girl in the purple is picking her butt or itching it. Very interesting poem and fun to try and see in the abstract. Thank you for sharing this
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka. The eye in the sky sees everything. Nothing is hidden from him. Everywhere we look in nature we cab find an eye in about everything.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
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A very well-written Tanka. The eye in the sky sees everything. Nothing is hidden from him. Everywhere we look in nature we cab find an eye in about everything.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2018
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Pam. I must admit, I am not one of the ones who will sewe the eyes, except those of the owl, of course. The painting is beautiful however.
Just to be sure, what is your definition of "abstract painting?"
Good work. Bless you, Bob
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Hi, Pam. I must admit, I am not one of the ones who will sewe the eyes, except those of the owl, of course. The painting is beautiful however.
Just to be sure, what is your definition of "abstract painting?"
Good work. Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
Comment from meeshu
I made this blanket review just for your short poem and great paintings. I will add details depending on how much I love the work. this looks like the Mothman of Appalachia to me. great, Pam..................meeshu
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
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I made this blanket review just for your short poem and great paintings. I will add details depending on how much I love the work. this looks like the Mothman of Appalachia to me. great, Pam..................meeshu
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
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Comment from Jaye Bennett
One of the most beautiful painting I ever saw was a picture of maple trees in the autumn, with each colorful leaf applied with a palette knife. Enchanting. I can see what is described in the Tanka, a good form for this topic. "Abstract owl" is a good pivot line. Good job.
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One of the most beautiful painting I ever saw was a picture of maple trees in the autumn, with each colorful leaf applied with a palette knife. Enchanting. I can see what is described in the Tanka, a good form for this topic. "Abstract owl" is a good pivot line. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
Comment from lyenochka
I don't see them as monkeys but two people in profile kissing. And that same area can look like an owl. I like how you make a puzzle in a painting and then describe it with a poem.
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I don't see them as monkeys but two people in profile kissing. And that same area can look like an owl. I like how you make a puzzle in a painting and then describe it with a poem.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
Comment from Tirza Savellano
Wow! This is a beautiful poem! Where do you get the inspiration for your abstract pieces? The image fits wonderfully with the picture. You really think outside the box. Great job!
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Wow! This is a beautiful poem! Where do you get the inspiration for your abstract pieces? The image fits wonderfully with the picture. You really think outside the box. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
Comment from royowen
Ay, ay, ay. Well done Pam, you've been taking a little time out, I think most of us have. Like you, I'll be taking time out, to get my work in order to publish, well done, blessings, Roy
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Ay, ay, ay. Well done Pam, you've been taking a little time out, I think most of us have. Like you, I'll be taking time out, to get my work in order to publish, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. Another interesting and very charming poem and oil painting. You have a unique style of painting that is relaxed and spontaneous. Such a joy to read and enjoy the visual. Marilyn
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Hi Pam. Another interesting and very charming poem and oil painting. You have a unique style of painting that is relaxed and spontaneous. Such a joy to read and enjoy the visual. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
