Comment from Six-Star Writer

Excellent

Pleasant. People like beaches and blue water. Though seaweed stinks. Lots of descriptions and details. I wouldn't want to visit this place, but you succeeded in giving the reader a thumbnail sketch of the place.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review. j

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hello Author! I like your submission very much. I felt like I could have gone there on vacation and seen just what it was like there. A day in the life as it were. Nice job.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018

Thanks for the review Susan. It really is a magical place. On the west coast of Zanzibar, there is Stonetown with the palaces and narrow streets, wooden dhows in the harbor. The sights, sounds and smell of this ancient town are so exotic and evoking, but I prefer the sandy peacefulness of Jambiani. Cheers, judester

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You have done a wonderful job of putting us there on Jambiani. I easily see myself joining the villagers who go to the beaches when the fishermen come in and later having lunch with one of the local families. GOOD ATTENTION TO DETAIL makes it easy to picture each scene. You are an excellent tour guide.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review Rod. Yes it really is magical. I usually stay for a couple months at a time, then when I return to regular life I am like 'whaa?' all squint eyed and confused. Like plunking Peter Pan in the middle of Times Square. I do have such wonderful memories. Cheers, judester