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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Spring Arrives in the North"First the war...the marshal
3 total reviews
Comment from Rob Caudle
A very enjoyable piece here the dialect was well written ahd rang true throughout. Not an easy thing to do. Your characters were well developed and I could imagine them as flesh and blood not card boar cut out on the page a real well done story.
Rob
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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A very enjoyable piece here the dialect was well written ahd rang true throughout. Not an easy thing to do. Your characters were well developed and I could imagine them as flesh and blood not card boar cut out on the page a real well done story.
Rob
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Rob, Thank you for the excellent rating and your kind comments. Catherin
Comment from AdaJulie
This is wonderful, reading it is a joy. The words are selected well create a scene that is a joy to follow and have a great message. Very good talent displayed here. Looking forward to more! I really enjoyed reading this!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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This is wonderful, reading it is a joy. The words are selected well create a scene that is a joy to follow and have a great message. Very good talent displayed here. Looking forward to more! I really enjoyed reading this!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your excellent rating and your very kind comments. Catherin
Comment from Sugarray77
Another good story of Jeb and Cal... I really liked it, but I was confused about the double identity and the he/she references... those are really distracting. You wrote with great western flair and kept that going logically... Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Another good story of Jeb and Cal... I really liked it, but I was confused about the double identity and the he/she references... those are really distracting. You wrote with great western flair and kept that going logically... Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the excellent rating and the critic... will make adjustments. Catherin
