Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "He Made America Hate Again "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
From the Colonial Days,
some have not altered their old ways,
and the Fear of the Stranger is still wrought with Danger.
Thank God for them. The five is for grammar not content.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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From the Colonial Days,
some have not altered their old ways,
and the Fear of the Stranger is still wrought with Danger.
Thank God for them. The five is for grammar not content.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review.
Good Bless you.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is well written from your point of view. Mine is the opposite. Hate isn't his message--it's unification. He's done more for blacks (that you have mentioned in your piece) than anyone before him. What he is trying to do is keep America a sovereign nation by welcoming those into the country who apply and are accepted legally--not those who demand they have a right to be here. They don't. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Your poem is well written from your point of view. Mine is the opposite. Hate isn't his message--it's unification. He's done more for blacks (that you have mentioned in your piece) than anyone before him. What he is trying to do is keep America a sovereign nation by welcoming those into the country who apply and are accepted legally--not those who demand they have a right to be here. They don't. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the insights and Kind review.
Comment from nor84
Contest entry says: This contest requires "blind" entries. That means your posted work will have no means to identify you when viewed.
There is quite a bit of identifying information on this entry, so you may want to address that. I do agree with the commentary.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Contest entry says: This contest requires "blind" entries. That means your posted work will have no means to identify you when viewed.
There is quite a bit of identifying information on this entry, so you may want to address that. I do agree with the commentary.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thank you for pointing that out.
God Bless you
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. your points are all well made. I wish you well in all your future endeavors..
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. your points are all well made. I wish you well in all your future endeavors..
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the review and insight.
God Bless you and your family
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Thank you for review and God Bless you and your family
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. your points are all well made. I wish you well in all your future endeavors..
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. Excellent verse and verbiage. your points are all well made. I wish you well in all your future endeavors..
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the review and Kind encouragement
God Bless you and your family
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Thank you for the Great review and insight
God Bless you and your family
Comment from kahpot
An excellent read and Wow your president is sure getting a mountain load of criticism at the moment without being on the mountain, very well written describing the ongoing faults we try to overcome, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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An excellent read and Wow your president is sure getting a mountain load of criticism at the moment without being on the mountain, very well written describing the ongoing faults we try to overcome, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the insights and Kind review
God Bless you and your family
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Thank you for the review and insight
God Bless you and your family
Comment from Jraokmepala
As much as I try to avoid politics, this really does express your feelings on our president's actions and views while staying a well-written poem.
Good job.
-Jr
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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As much as I try to avoid politics, this really does express your feelings on our president's actions and views while staying a well-written poem.
Good job.
-Jr
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the review and insight and God Bless you and your family
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Thank you for the review and insight
God Bless you and your family
Comment from WryWriter
I think you have voiced your opinion well in this commentary poetic work. I agree that there is no place for bigotry and hate in America. America is only as strong as its leadership voted in by a strong "we the people." Strength does not come from blaming other people. It comes from standing on your own two feet and accepting responsibility. A strong leader can be heard declaring four words..."The buck stops here."
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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I think you have voiced your opinion well in this commentary poetic work. I agree that there is no place for bigotry and hate in America. America is only as strong as its leadership voted in by a strong "we the people." Strength does not come from blaming other people. It comes from standing on your own two feet and accepting responsibility. A strong leader can be heard declaring four words..."The buck stops here."
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Yes I agree and participate in our elections.
Thank again.
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Thank you for the review and insights
God Bless you and your family
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A very good contest entry! I'm amazed how you could state so many opinions and keep the rhyme. Well done! Your title is very fitting for the commentary, and I liked your play on words.
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Gale
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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A very good contest entry! I'm amazed how you could state so many opinions and keep the rhyme. Well done! Your title is very fitting for the commentary, and I liked your play on words.
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Gale
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you for rating and insight.
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Thank you for the insights and Kind review
God Bless you and your family
