~ Soothing Scribe ~
Lune Poem - 5,3,518 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
It always amazes me when one can say so much with strong meaning within a few lines
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
It always amazes me when one can say so much with strong meaning within a few lines
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Miss Cookie, it is nice to hear from you. Thank you for taking the time to review. Your comments are much appreciated, as always. Merry Christmas. ~DD
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Your welcome and it's my pleasure.
Have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem about the wonderful pen and ink that we can use to sooth our minds by writing about the things that make us happy or make us sad and in that way we cleanse our soul.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Lune poem about the wonderful pen and ink that we can use to sooth our minds by writing about the things that make us happy or make us sad and in that way we cleanse our soul.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your review on my short poem. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
I like your 3-5-3 lune poem visioning a poet like Emily Dickinson writing her poems with a quill with wet ink.
Best wishes to you in this contest
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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I like your 3-5-3 lune poem visioning a poet like Emily Dickinson writing her poems with a quill with wet ink.
Best wishes to you in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you Gert for your review on my short poem. As always, your comments are very much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
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You are welcome DD Gert
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello DD. You have penned a beautiful verse for the Lune Poetry contest. I really like the flowing verse that says so much with little effort. A very good write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Hello DD. You have penned a beautiful verse for the Lune Poetry contest. I really like the flowing verse that says so much with little effort. A very good write.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem Melissa. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas to you :-) ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Soothing words spoke by a true poet and I wish you luck with the contest, few words, but a volume of healing words, a pleasure to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Soothing words spoke by a true poet and I wish you luck with the contest, few words, but a volume of healing words, a pleasure to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Dolly, Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas to you :-) ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very well scribed lune. By convention though these things should be presented flushed left or right when the shape of the lines gives a crescent shape from which the name of the form is derived. It is not a rule but it does make sense.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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This is a very well scribed lune. By convention though these things should be presented flushed left or right when the shape of the lines gives a crescent shape from which the name of the form is derived. It is not a rule but it does make sense.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018
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Your wish is my command. Thank you for the constructive review. Always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from rama devi
Lovely. Your title drew me in. It felt like what it describes...the hushed S sounds are soothing. The W sounds are too, in line one. Very fine poetic devices in this true to form and well done lune. A six if I had one! Good luck.
Warmly, rd
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Lovely. Your title drew me in. It felt like what it describes...the hushed S sounds are soothing. The W sounds are too, in line one. Very fine poetic devices in this true to form and well done lune. A six if I had one! Good luck.
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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RD, Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated and the thought of a six. Merry Christmas to you :) ~DD
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Thanks. Happy Holy Daze!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's true, poetry is healing, whether for the heart or something else. Once we have written our feelings down, it's like removing them from inside. I've always been able to say more in poetry than I've ever done in speaking the words. This was an excellent Lune poem. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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It's true, poetry is healing, whether for the heart or something else. Once we have written our feelings down, it's like removing them from inside. I've always been able to say more in poetry than I've ever done in speaking the words. This was an excellent Lune poem. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Sandra, Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas to you :-) ~DD
