~ Soothing Scribe ~
Lune Poem - 5,3,518 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Love this! Writing is a healing balm to us all. So is the reading of it. I enjoyed your fine offering very much. My best to you and in the Line Poetry Contest.
Sally:+)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Love this! Writing is a healing balm to us all. So is the reading of it. I enjoyed your fine offering very much. My best to you and in the Line Poetry Contest.
Sally:+)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sally. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Lune poem, much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed, DD. I wish you much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Poetry soothes the writer and the reader, both. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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This is very nicely composed, DD. I wish you much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Poetry soothes the writer and the reader, both. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Marilyn ~ Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are always much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, DD.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the image in line one,
the one word "poetry" in the middle,
and the concluding line that
pulls the whole poem together.
-There is a calm feel to that, too.
-Have a Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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-Nice image and presentation, DD.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the image in line one,
the one word "poetry" in the middle,
and the concluding line that
pulls the whole poem together.
-There is a calm feel to that, too.
-Have a Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thank you Pam. I appreciate your comments, as always. Merry Christmas. ~DD
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You are welcome, DD, and thanks for the Christmas wishes.
Comment from rspoet
Hello DD,
An excellent lune poem and entry for the contest
It's always good to write about writing
using excellent poetics like the nice alliteration
of the "w" and "p" words
Writing does have a healing, uplifting effect.
Well done
Best wishes to you in this holiday season
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Hello DD,
An excellent lune poem and entry for the contest
It's always good to write about writing
using excellent poetics like the nice alliteration
of the "w" and "p" words
Writing does have a healing, uplifting effect.
Well done
Best wishes to you in this holiday season
Robert
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Robert ~ Thank you for taking the time to review. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lune makes excellent use of each syllable to express how
very powerful poetry is--how powerful words are. We can use them
to rear down or uplift others.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Your lune makes excellent use of each syllable to express how
very powerful poetry is--how powerful words are. We can use them
to rear down or uplift others.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Janice, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from June Sargent
This is so true. Poetry written from the heart can be so cathartic and healing. The power of the pen is limitless. We just need to allow our heart and mind to go with the flow of the muse within us. Thanks for sharing these insightful words.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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This is so true. Poetry written from the heart can be so cathartic and healing. The power of the pen is limitless. We just need to allow our heart and mind to go with the flow of the muse within us. Thanks for sharing these insightful words.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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June ~ Thank you for taking the time to review my Lune poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry DD. I liked your Lune poetry entry. I do believe the wet pen holds the words not yet written. Thanks for sharing and wishing you a very Happy Christmas XXK.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Good luck with your contest entry DD. I liked your Lune poetry entry. I do believe the wet pen holds the words not yet written. Thanks for sharing and wishing you a very Happy Christmas XXK.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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K, thank you so very much for the wonderful review and six stars. I feel like my Christmas has come early. I am still happy smiling. Thank you and a very merry Christmas to you. ~DDxx
Comment from lyenochka
Superbly done, DD! I think you'll do great in the contest. I like how you started with the alliterative "words wet with" and yes, poetry is really a "balm" for the soul.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Superbly done, DD! I think you'll do great in the contest. I like how you started with the alliterative "words wet with" and yes, poetry is really a "balm" for the soul.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thank you Helen. As always, your supportive reviews are most welcome. ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
Such a lovely entry Miss DD.
When I've written something I truly like...I come back to it, and it does sooth.
Of course...if I can't find the words I want...it makes me nutso, ha ha.
Loved this,
blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Such a lovely entry Miss DD.
When I've written something I truly like...I come back to it, and it does sooth.
Of course...if I can't find the words I want...it makes me nutso, ha ha.
Loved this,
blessings...
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Irish Rain, thank you for taking the time to review. Your comments are much appreciated. Merry Christmas. ~DD
Comment from Mark D. R.
DD,
This a delicious little verse for the Lune contest. The drawing is indicative how people penned their poetry (and letters) a while ago. Unfortunately, some schools no longer actively teach cursive writing.
'words and 'wet' are nice alliteratives
I do like the 'wet ink' 'pen' - old school writing!
'healing balm' is a nice phrase
Probably said before: I like flowery text, but some readers may have difficulty in reading/seeing your particular font choice. I recognize it goes with your verse in a nice way, but ...
Consider asking older family or friends about this font style and their readability of the same.
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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DD,
This a delicious little verse for the Lune contest. The drawing is indicative how people penned their poetry (and letters) a while ago. Unfortunately, some schools no longer actively teach cursive writing.
'words and 'wet' are nice alliteratives
I do like the 'wet ink' 'pen' - old school writing!
'healing balm' is a nice phrase
Probably said before: I like flowery text, but some readers may have difficulty in reading/seeing your particular font choice. I recognize it goes with your verse in a nice way, but ...
Consider asking older family or friends about this font style and their readability of the same.
Mark
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Mark, thank Thank for taking the time to review. Your comments are appreciated. For you, I will try not to use cursive writing font on my next post :-) Merry Christmas. ~DD
