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Comment from WryWriter
This deserves a 6 star but I don't have one. It yanked the reader in at the start and held a death-grip until the end. Pacing, transitions, word descriptive use...all on target. Good ending point to bring reader back to earth before the next terror. No suggestions.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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This deserves a 6 star but I don't have one. It yanked the reader in at the start and held a death-grip until the end. Pacing, transitions, word descriptive use...all on target. Good ending point to bring reader back to earth before the next terror. No suggestions.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your review, WryWriter. Much appreciated. Best wishes for 2019. Tony.
Comment from lyenochka
Very interesting dream - full of mythological creatures and some ominous portent of things to come? It's so nice of Helen to prepare breakfast considering she was pretty emotionally distraught the night before. Hope they ditch Mme Durand!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Very interesting dream - full of mythological creatures and some ominous portent of things to come? It's so nice of Helen to prepare breakfast considering she was pretty emotionally distraught the night before. Hope they ditch Mme Durand!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your review, Helen. Much appreciated. Best wishes for 2019. Tony.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great chapter, Tony. The words/lines flowed smoothly with great descriptions. I really liked the way you described in detail the nightmare Charles had (although I didn't like the substance of the nightmare). I thought all along that Jeanne was more involved than she let on and knew more than she did about why they were after her. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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This is a great chapter, Tony. The words/lines flowed smoothly with great descriptions. I really liked the way you described in detail the nightmare Charles had (although I didn't like the substance of the nightmare). I thought all along that Jeanne was more involved than she let on and knew more than she did about why they were after her. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Thanks for your review, Jan, and for the sixth star. Much appreciated. Best wishes for 2019. Tony.
Comment from Tootsie55
This was a great chapter with all the dreams and so on and extra info on Jeanne. Loved this short funny saying....Scotsmen tossing the caber. No spags and well done throughout. Now I can put another chapter of the Across Australia story up.
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This was a great chapter with all the dreams and so on and extra info on Jeanne. Loved this short funny saying....Scotsmen tossing the caber. No spags and well done throughout. Now I can put another chapter of the Across Australia story up.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Many thanks for your review, Tootsie, and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent write. I enjoyed reading this next installment about Charles, Helen, and Kayla. It is very vivid and full of twists and turns. Your writing about the dream and all of the colorful descriptions there was very well done. Good job.
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Excellent write. I enjoyed reading this next installment about Charles, Helen, and Kayla. It is very vivid and full of twists and turns. Your writing about the dream and all of the colorful descriptions there was very well done. Good job.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Many thanks for your review, Sugarray, and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
