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The Last Priestess

A 'Storm Approaching' Entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from meeshu
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I AM IN AWE. your creative imagination simply amazes me. a truly epic legend/tale from that little prompt. you are a Magician and an Original, Yvette.
WOW.................meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
    Okay, so you have just made my week, dude!! :) I am so very glad that you enjoyed my fantasy (one of about a million or so that live in the blonde head - LOL!)....your review has put a smile to make it through at least some of the in-laws' visit.....:) :) :) :) Blessings to you and Cyndy! :) Yvette
reply by meeshu on 23-Dec-2018
    in-laws are like gum stuck to the bottom of a great pair of shoes. sure, it's a hassle but not worth throwing out perfectly good shoes. I just made that up. Happy Christmas, Dudes..........gary&cyndy.
Comment from royowen
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I enjoyed your somewhat mystic posting, I found the main character. Quite fascinating, there is the odd writer here on fanstory that write something similar. Of course this is still unique, and as most writers carry their own unique form, and even though they may be similar, they still carry that print on it. Well done,great scribing, blessjngs, Roy
Typo : A stench that (Road) the wind, rode.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
    Wow, Roy, thanx for the wonderful review, Roy -- so appreciate your taking the time!! :) ;) And thanx for the heads up on the 'rode' .... got it corrected, sir!! :) ;) Thanx again and Merry Christmas! ;)
reply by royowen on 21-Dec-2018
    Well done
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Wow, you have a great imagination. This is very well done, I didn't see any errors, but I did get a little confused as to who was talking about the battle. I know it must be Gauvain, but at first I was unsure. I do hope you do well in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
    Wow, Roxanna, you have certainly put a smile on my face for the weekend with that wonderful review -- appreciate your stopping by today -- please know that you're always welcome to stop by anytime...the door's always open!! :) ;) Happy Christmas Season wishes to you and yours! ;) ;)
Comment from way2gokevs
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A truly wonderful story of mystery, magic and love before and during the approaching storm. Very well written kept me engrossed to the end. Much obliged for sharing and the best of luck in the contest.
Cheers.
Kev.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
    Thanx, Kev, for stopping in...I am thrilled that you enjoyed my non-traditional write - Fantasy is where my heart is! :) ;) ;) Happy holidays to all in your circle 'round there!! ;) ;)
Comment from AdaJulie
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My this is lovely. What talent indeed. It take a special insight to write like this,

I honor you for your keen abilities!
Merry Christmas ð??? my friend

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
    Oh, thank you, Ada!! You've made my weekend! :) And a Merry Christmas to you as well! :) :)