Tanka(seven palms)
A Tanka poem27 total reviews
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Your poem is well articulated and unique with excellent writing style.Excellent piece of work. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Your poem is well articulated and unique with excellent writing style.Excellent piece of work. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Jonadab for your wonderful review
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is a very beautifully written and illustrated Tanka poem about the seven palms. You used great words and lovely art work by your painting! love and blessings, Teri
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Pam, This is a very beautifully written and illustrated Tanka poem about the seven palms. You used great words and lovely art work by your painting! love and blessings, Teri
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Teri for your wonderful review
Comment from donette1914
simply lovely
i really like the way you write
very thought provoking
very believable
i love the artwork
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 12/20 2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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simply lovely
i really like the way you write
very thought provoking
very believable
i love the artwork
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 12/20 2018
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you donette for your wonderful review
Comment from SLMorrical
A beautiful poem. The picture adds to the poem. It is a lovely painting by you. This flows very well. I can just picture being on the beach watching the sunset. Very well done. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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A beautiful poem. The picture adds to the poem. It is a lovely painting by you. This flows very well. I can just picture being on the beach watching the sunset. Very well done. Keep writing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you SLMorrical for your wonderful review
Comment from RodG
You have captured the essence of your colorful painting very well in this tanks. Easy to visualize the seven palms at the closing of day. Your use of alliteration and consonance enhances the MOOD you are after. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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You have captured the essence of your colorful painting very well in this tanks. Easy to visualize the seven palms at the closing of day. Your use of alliteration and consonance enhances the MOOD you are after. Rod
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Rod for your wonderful review
Comment from royowen
This is a really good tanka Pam, along with a good pivot line and comnnecting lines, the artwork really sets up the whole poem, well done, good job, blessjngs, Roy
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This is a really good tanka Pam, along with a good pivot line and comnnecting lines, the artwork really sets up the whole poem, well done, good job, blessjngs, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Roy for your wonderful review. Happy New Year! I will be posting far less next year
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Welcome Pam, HNY
Comment from Pantygynt
This tanka describes picture beautifully though the devil within me is tempted to ask what happened to the other half (of the sun). Come to think of it, it is probably rising on the other side of the world
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This tanka describes picture beautifully though the devil within me is tempted to ask what happened to the other half (of the sun). Come to think of it, it is probably rising on the other side of the world
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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The other half of the sun has fallen off of the horizon. Poor little thing is shivering in his underwear. Argh. Why do I open my mouth, anyway? Lol. Thank you for your excellent review
