Tanka(seven palms)
A Tanka poem27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka and a great painting to illustrate and complement the words of your poem and vice versa. I love this great image and great colors too.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Tanka and a great painting to illustrate and complement the words of your poem and vice versa. I love this great image and great colors too.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from lyenochka
Gorgeous sunset picture, Pam. I love the personification of the sky relieved to get the cool, "soothing night."
Had no power most of the day and am trying to review on my phone.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Gorgeous sunset picture, Pam. I love the personification of the sky relieved to get the cool, "soothing night."
Had no power most of the day and am trying to review on my phone.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Helen for your wonderful review
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice presentation of these palm Trees blowing in the breeze as the sun sets for the evening. Red skies are a sailors warning for the change in the weather.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Nice presentation of these palm Trees blowing in the breeze as the sun sets for the evening. Red skies are a sailors warning for the change in the weather.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you country ranch writer for another wonderful review
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a very nice and beautiful painting. I love the colors you used. Your tanka is nice, as well. My favorite lines are the last two. Your use of "blushing" and "soothing" to describe the sky and the night is pleasant and evocative. It leaves me with a good feeling. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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This is a very nice and beautiful painting. I love the colors you used. Your tanka is nice, as well. My favorite lines are the last two. Your use of "blushing" and "soothing" to describe the sky and the night is pleasant and evocative. It leaves me with a good feeling. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Jesse for your wonderful review
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Hi Pam
You're welcome.
Jesse
Comment from Mastery
Absolutely love your sky here, Pam. Great job on all of this one. I love your imagination at work. "awaits soothing night" is a great line in rthe poem also. Bless you, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Absolutely love your sky here, Pam. Great job on all of this one. I love your imagination at work. "awaits soothing night" is a great line in rthe poem also. Bless you, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Bob for another wonderful review
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely composed and illustrated, Pam. I like the colors. Water is painted and reflects the sun. Well done. The first thing I did was count the palms. Yep! Seven. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Very nicely composed and illustrated, Pam. I like the colors. Water is painted and reflects the sun. Well done. The first thing I did was count the palms. Yep! Seven. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Lol Marilyn. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from meeshu
hey Pam, this is a great picture, lots of color. a great little write to go with it and you've got the whole package. very nicely done..............meeshu
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hey Pam, this is a great picture, lots of color. a great little write to go with it and you've got the whole package. very nicely done..............meeshu
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you meeshu for your wonderful review. Happy New Year
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a lovely tropical vibe your oil painting creates. I am reminded of the TV show Miami Vice. :) This looks like a romantic cruise vacation I wish I was taking for Christmas. Love your "blushing sunset" "towering" palms. Great word choices--magical painting!!!
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What a lovely tropical vibe your oil painting creates. I am reminded of the TV show Miami Vice. :) This looks like a romantic cruise vacation I wish I was taking for Christmas. Love your "blushing sunset" "towering" palms. Great word choices--magical painting!!!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Cindy for your kind words and excellent review
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like the colors you use in your artwork, Pam. It looks vibrant and alive with all of the layers you have use. Good verse to amplify and enhance it ... also pulls it all together. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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I really like the colors you use in your artwork, Pam. It looks vibrant and alive with all of the layers you have use. Good verse to amplify and enhance it ... also pulls it all together. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
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Thank you Melissa for another lovely review
Comment from Kelly Grim
First, I LOVE the colors in this painting! I also love "seven palms" and "tower" and "blushing" -- awsome little tanka! Thank you so much for sharing!!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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First, I LOVE the colors in this painting! I also love "seven palms" and "tower" and "blushing" -- awsome little tanka! Thank you so much for sharing!!!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Thank you Kelly for your kind words and lovely review. Happy New Year! I will be posting far less next year
