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Tanka(seven palms)

A Tanka poem

27 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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These words are a succinct description of the picture. I like the blushing personification for the color of the sky. Did you mean this as an ephrastic
poem?
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2019

Comment from l.raven
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Hi Pam, your picture looks like where my husband an I would stay when we went to Florida...we you look off the balcony...it's beautiful...I love your poem sweet girl...and I love your picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
    Thank you Linda for your wonderful review. Merry achristmas!
reply by l.raven on 26-Dec-2018
    your so welcome Pam...and I hope you had a wonderful Christmas...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Pam, What a pretty painting. Nice colors, and a very pretty Tanka to go with it. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Hope Santa brings you something nice!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
    Thank you Susan for another lovely review
Comment from jenintorre
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'Hi Pam
'Blushing sunset sky'. I love that. A very descriptive tanka poem describing your lovely painting. You are very talented. All the best. Love Jen.x

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you Jen for your lovely review. Happy New Year!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This piece paints a very picturesque scene. Your palms are like sentinels,
and the sky is appealingly personified. Excuse the unpremeditated alliteration
in this review! LOL

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you Janice for a wonderful review
Comment from June Sargent
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I love the brilliance and burst of color in this painting. The sun is setting, as the landscape blushes, waiting for the cooling evening breezes. Lovely artwork enhanced by the well chosen words.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you June for your lovely review HappyNew Year?. I will be posting far less next year.
Comment from djeckert
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Nice. it makes me crave a much needed vacation. It paints a beautiful picture of the print that accompanies it. I enjoyed this "micro vaca", God Bless, and Merry Christmas

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you dieckert for a wonderful review. Happy New Year!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This tanka, Seven Palms, looks good and gives the standing frond wavers the sense of anticipation that the sun will eventually set and night can begin. Nice,

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you Bill for another wonderful review. Happy New Year! I will be posting far less next year
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love your painting, and could quite easily put that on my wall, your words are soothing too, I often see this scene because I live among the palms, and the blushing sunset sky, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
    Thank you Dolly for your wonderful review
Comment from jmshumate
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You did a nice job on this tanka. A beautiful description of to me a tropical sunset, and a very nice job on you painting. They compliment one another well.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
    Thank you jmshumate for a truly lovely review. Happy New Year!
reply by jmshumate on 29-Dec-2018
    Happy New Years!