Let The Truth Be Told
free verse, story in a poem15 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is 'A Holiday Contest Entree' rich in Theme and imagery.
It Read and it Flowed Well...
Adjective Content...
Objective Content...
Both Excellent and Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This is 'A Holiday Contest Entree' rich in Theme and imagery.
It Read and it Flowed Well...
Adjective Content...
Objective Content...
Both Excellent and Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Merry Christmas
Comment from Earl Corp
It's December 1st, "Oh ShitI need to behave Santa is coming soon," is the takeaway I got from your poem. I'm kind of confused, you billed it as free verse but it had rhymes, which I'm cool with. I like poems that rhyme, make sense, and give me a smile. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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It's December 1st, "Oh ShitI need to behave Santa is coming soon," is the takeaway I got from your poem. I'm kind of confused, you billed it as free verse but it had rhymes, which I'm cool with. I like poems that rhyme, make sense, and give me a smile. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Merry Christmas
PS - Free verse can be anything you want... let your mind wander and enjoy writing
Comment from Sugarray77
I love the animation. I think your clever verse is a good entry for this contest prompt. A ramble on how it is time to look at the naughty and nice list. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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I love the animation. I think your clever verse is a good entry for this contest prompt. A ramble on how it is time to look at the naughty and nice list. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Merry Christmas
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Time to enjoy holidays, celebrate Merry Christmas, speak the truth, confess and be forgiven, get gifts from Santa, never scare of the past, have faith in Lord; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Time to enjoy holidays, celebrate Merry Christmas, speak the truth, confess and be forgiven, get gifts from Santa, never scare of the past, have faith in Lord; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Happy Holidays :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A bitter sweet tale told here about the Christmas hype and you are talking to a believer here! Magic at Christmas gives an uplifting feeling, best wishes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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A bitter sweet tale told here about the Christmas hype and you are talking to a believer here! Magic at Christmas gives an uplifting feeling, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Merry Christmas
