Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very very well-written poem about the perfection of our mind that is not visible in the mirror at all. If only everyone will try to find the inner beauty there will not be one unhappy soul.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Hi Sandra,.Thank you and of course I had a bit of fun with this one and yes beauty is below the surface so you are right. Cheers

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And that is well how it should be -- no if's, and's or butt's about it! :) ;) LOL! This is a wonderful picture of keeping that smile on as we age -- absolutely love it! :) Thanx so much for sharing and you've got my vote, babe!! :) :)

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi Y.M. Roger Thank you for your look at my poem and support I do appreciate your warm comments Cheers

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, perfection is in the eye of the beholder and some well-placed mirrors, we must like and enjoy our appearance otherwise it won't be seen by others, a great poem for this contest, best wishes****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi kahpot Thanks for giving me a lookin A bit of fun to think I might Look like this ha Ha Cheers

Comment from fm wright

Excellent

I only see what I want to see. Your humorously funny poem reminds us all about that. I really like the way the thought and words flow. To me, the lines on a catwalk, be a smash and Yes, in my mirror see it all, seem kind of forced in order to fit them into the syllable count. I might write them as: on catwalks, I'd be a smash and In MY mirror, I see it all.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi fm wright Thanks for your review and sugfestions I have taken them up so many Cheers they are better now Yes a bit of fun

reply by fm wright on 18-Dec-2018

They were just suggestions, you know. I don't feel I have he right to tell anyone how to write. That's just the way I would have written it. But if they helped good and you're welcome.

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

No No they were good suggestions I would not have used them if I didn't think so so thank you.
I also give my opinion from time to time and let the author decide, like you say it is our work but I have often improved my work by helpful suggestions.Cheers

reply by fm wright on 19-Dec-2018

As most certainly, have I. I am truly glad they helped!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, this is a fun write and I laughed throughout, go to the beach and let it all hang out and I have the perfect mirror for you in my bedroom because it lies to me all the time! I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed the read, lvoe Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi Dolly, A bot of fun at my expense I thought This is how I might look Ha Ha Cheers for your luck I probably need it LOL

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Here is the lady proud of her own body, physique, figure, looks and attitude, and she thinks she is still perfect in her physical appearance and personality; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi DR
ALCREATOR Thanks for a lookin and yes one must not take on so serious I am quite alright having a go at myself a bit of fun in thos creationCheers

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow and very funny. good luck in the contest/prompt..

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

Hi Meeshu, Thanks for looking in my mirror Ha Ha Cheers for yoir good luck