Recoloring the World
5-line poem contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
Ahh, spring representing the time of new life. It is one of the most beautiful times of year, and brings joy, where winters clouds have blocked the sun. Very good 5-liner. Keep up the good writing!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Ahh, spring representing the time of new life. It is one of the most beautiful times of year, and brings joy, where winters clouds have blocked the sun. Very good 5-liner. Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review this. I appreciate the encouraging words.
dp
Comment from susand3022
Hi,
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this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
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Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basicly sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember.... LEARNING IS EARNING
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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I would rather have an honest review where the number of stars match the words.
I don't like the reviews where the words sound like raves but then you
only get three stars.
Joan
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That was worth the 5, Dragonpoet, springtime always is! Can we leave winter yet??? ;)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry, DP. Your words paint a great picture in my mind. I like your topic. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. Good job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry, DP. Your words paint a great picture in my mind. I like your topic. You expressed your thoughts/feelings well. Good job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your kind words and generous rating, Jan
Joan
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a successful write in depicting the change in seasons, especially with the suggestion of warmth in the color of spring - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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In my opinion, a successful write in depicting the change in seasons, especially with the suggestion of warmth in the color of spring - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the kind comments and generous rating.
Joan
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You are very welcome, Joan, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Very nice 5 Line Poem. Shouldn't last line have just 5 syllables? Might change to "Hope grows. Life's renewed." Or something like that. Of course, I could be wrong. The poem is a nice narrative of winter's decline and the return of leaves and flowers. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Very nice 5 Line Poem. Shouldn't last line have just 5 syllables? Might change to "Hope grows. Life's renewed." Or something like that. Of course, I could be wrong. The poem is a nice narrative of winter's decline and the return of leaves and flowers. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review. I will check the syllable count.
dp
Comment from GracieAnn
Dragon,
This poem is creative and straight to the point. The changes of the seasons are well stated. However, if I understand the rules of the contest, the fourth line should have 7 syllables and you have 9. Recolors landscape after grayness - maybe something like - Re-tints landscape after gray? Redo the syllables and it's good work!
:0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Dragon,
This poem is creative and straight to the point. The changes of the seasons are well stated. However, if I understand the rules of the contest, the fourth line should have 7 syllables and you have 9. Recolors landscape after grayness - maybe something like - Re-tints landscape after gray? Redo the syllables and it's good work!
:0 GracieAnn
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging remarks and the careful reading. You are the first one in 13 reviewers to notice the syllable count is wrong. I made the change.
dragonpoet
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A positive person expects, hopes and aspires for good environment, atmosphere, weather, season, people and everything around, if there is anything grey, he will go for recolouring the world; well said, well done. Write inspire change for 1234 Years--- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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A positive person expects, hopes and aspires for good environment, atmosphere, weather, season, people and everything around, if there is anything grey, he will go for recolouring the world; well said, well done. Write inspire change for 1234 Years--- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review.
dp
Comment from Graybærd
As I sit here on this cold winter day I read your poem of what is to come. While it is a story of winter to spring in a literal sense it also speaks of hope. Good luck with this entry.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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As I sit here on this cold winter day I read your poem of what is to come. While it is a story of winter to spring in a literal sense it also speaks of hope. Good luck with this entry.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review and the good luck wishes.
dragonpoet
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles dragonpoet for your
5-line poem contest entry of how
recoloring the world in the season of spring can take the dull grayness away
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Smiles dragonpoet for your
5-line poem contest entry of how
recoloring the world in the season of spring can take the dull grayness away
Gert
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your continued support,Gert.
Joan
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You are welcome Joan Gert
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem about the springtime that means more sunshine and warmth after the cold winter is always a change for the better.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
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A very well-written five-line poem about the springtime that means more sunshine and warmth after the cold winter is always a change for the better.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018
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I agree, Sandra. Thanks for the review.
Happy New Years to you also.
Joan
